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komrad1156komrad1156over 8 years ago
Round three!

Two errors in one sentence. Nice work, Professor! Again, I stopped reading as soon as I found this gem.

You wrote: Trouble was the damn thing as long too.

Written correctly: Trouble was the damn thing was long, too.

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I just write for fun, although it is often said that most autobiographies are fiction while most fiction is autobiographical. Who knows. :c)