by Agnol
I'm not usually into incest stories but the smoking part grabbed my attention. I grew up about the same time as Danny in the story; smoking was accepted then so unlike now. I just love an elegant woman smoking a cigarette who knows how to do it correctly, confidant with a sexy "devil may care" attitude. I started smoking myself in mid-life after knowing and loving a sexy smoker. She got me started after she noticed my attention whenever she lit up, I was fervent "anti" when it came to tobacco until this Goddess showed me the pleasure that a cigarette can bring. I, sadly, lost this pretty woman to another man but still think of her at night when I light up my once daily smoke. I'm a sucker for a good love story and your submission IS a story of true love...forbidden but true. Society is so quick and cruel to judge people, but how can true love be wrong when both people love each other freely? I never could understand the hate some people have for others who love each other but are different than they are. Thank-you for efforts, I did truly enjoy this story.
I'm normally not into the whole smoking fetish either, but this was a very good story reflective of your writing talent. I especially like the "Bobby" series and Jake. Keep up the good work!!
But who's in a hurry? Best story in a long time, even though it's a genre I don't like.
one of the best in a long time...theres the story,not to mention a romantic one, and so does the sex...good job, write more romantic mother and son stories, just the two of them.
Your writing was eloquent and flowed wonderfully. The subject matter was an incredible turn-on. I wish it could have been me with my smoking mom.
-slimv
Very well written. I was consumed by your story from the first paragraph. Easily one of the most well written stories I have read, here or otherwise. Your descriptions were so wordy, and yet not cumbersome and repetative. It was as if I were there in your shoes, aware of every last detail.
Thank You for sharing your lovely work with us, Tony
why the fuck is he crying every 3 seconds. unbearable writing. you're a girl aren't you.