All Comments on 'Mom and Me - Adventures with Spunk Ch. 01'

No sex nothing and you expect what from this? One star and even that is too much.

Enjoyed part 1, very much looking forward to part 2

What a great build up. I can't wait for Part II. Hurry up !! (LOL)

This chapter had no incest or sex period. Should have been longer and included at least some form of either. One star sorry

Hope the following parts get a lot more intimate

Thanks for the free read forget all these fools hating because there was no sex of any kind. The pyramid weren't build or even designed in a day.

Forget the haters, they are looking for a quick wank. It's your story bring it to a boil when you're ready.

I really like you're writing style for the son's voice. Was really enjoyable read, though there wasn't any sexual escapades. Wish it were longer, but good first entry. Funny, in a word.

more as soon as possible pleaseeee.it has started so good,cant hardly wait for next chapters!

Yeah forget the people complaining. Im loving the sexual build up. Honestly I think you gave us a pretty good scene right off the bat with the dream sequence. Can already see the mom seeing how full those containers get and wanting a crack at the source. Keep up the good work and hope to see a part 2 soon

where they guys mom had to measure his sperm over a 21 day period-the story ended up being about 15 chapters if I remember correctly

You're like the opposite of the snorts guy, and its funny as hell.

I will tell you one thing i have not laughed so hard while reading a story like this in ages and it sounds so much like what would go on at a doctors office in the late sixties and seventies when the kid in puberty had a problem . I am still laughing and will probably continue to do so for several days some of the phrasing you used fit in just perfectly to what was transpiring at the time I really enjoyed the read thank you so much

Good measuring my cum story

Laughed out loud. Excellent first start with a lots of comic relief. Hope all your works are as good as this. Five stars for a job well done. - Vriesea

5 stars are not enough - wish I could give it 15!! Great descriptive writing & phraseology. Props for grammar, spelling, proofreading, editing!

"So mortified you want to crawl and hide up your own asshole.” Dude, first off, your sense of humor and one liners are better than Rodney Dangerfield. But that one was the best. Never have I laughed so hard reading a story about sex till yours. The story is top notch and your delivery is priceless. 5*

I have never laughed so hard in a long time and hope it carries on. 5 Stars is not enough by far. KEEP IT UP.

so far so good bro 100% HOT thanks

3 stars Would have been more if you could decide which country it takes place in. Surgery means your in the hospital having an operation. Notice I didn't say "in hospital" since that is mostly used by folks in the UK. No one in the US uses the term wank, or toss off. You definitely have talent but need to do a little research on terminology used in the us. But at least you didn't have an adult dressed in a newborn's clothes (singlet).

So far the story has been pretty stupid but I will finish reading it. Maybe you wrote the story to be stupid. No doctor would use the word sperm. The doctor would say ejaculate and semen.