by PowderJockey
With over 300 grammatical errors it is a little hard to get past
I didn't notice a single one. Guess I was too busy cumming. Great story! Bring on chapter 3. As you might guess, 5 stars and faved story. Thanks for the ride, Jockey.
regards, max052
Which idiot stops reading to tally up the grammatical errors?
Hot story!
You need to finish it. Your on a winner here. Can't wait for chapter 3. 5 star effort regardless of the 300 errors that our so called ENGLISH professor found....Fuck ,there goes your Nobel prize for literature
Very good family loving and still lots to be shared by all in this story. Please write more.
Screw the grammatical comments!! Great story.
One of the best ever. Wish there were more chapters. Thank you
Really! The sister tells him her friend wants to fuck him but he'd rather stay at home really! the mans "supposedly" hadn't had sex for 3 years Yet still rather stay home eating a steak #REALLY!!!! Come'On Man!!!
Don't know any man who wouldn't jump at chance for an empty(sex) with any woman instead of having to use his hand
there were a few only small thing but add up to make story unbelievable
Also Don't why people care about Grammatical errors as long as its readable & a touch believable & oh hot thats all we should worry about
GREAT story except that it was way too short. Need to continue with possibly getting mother and sister involved at the same time (3-way), Now: Not that old " you should help put some sunscreen on my back" trope
Snicker..."helping Gail sort princes from frogs?" cute...
I loved that mom asked him to explain what he was thinking about Jess while jerking off...Then; "My long absence from sex " doesn't having just fucked his mom count? . . . .