All Comments on 'Mom and Son in the Car Pt. 01'

GOOD START. KEEP GOING.

Part 1 is hard to believe. Bring on part 2.

Sounds alike mama wasn’t really sleeping.

I like the idea of the story. I’ve read many on this type of thread.

I know that you’re going to add to it but make it longer, tease a little more and make more believable please.

This was a rather brief chapter.

You are doing a great job. Keep it up.

yes part 2,3,4 and maybe 5,6,7 lol great start to the story m8 cant wait for more

Let’s see where this goes

Please part two ASAP

you cannot tease us

yes you must write a chapter 2 and maybe even more

Looking forward to part 2

Loved it continue on.

Can't wait for part 2.

really excellent really awesome . foolishly though incredibly short ......

YOU BETTER NOT INCLUDE THE FATHER . IF YOU MUST INCLUDE .

HE BETTER NOT INVOLVED SOMETIME SOON ...... you could always make

the mother along son's ex that's from college just getting it on . whether son

becomes aware . whether son doesn't learn ...... won't matter

How many times is this story going to get ripped off. Try something new, (and believable).

I always live reading stories like that when two family members are in the back of a vehicle and having fun while unknown to the driver. Please continue with more.

This story has all the makings to be VERY hot!!!!! Can't wait for the second part...Please hurry!!!

Hell YES You need to provide us with Part Two.

Hope fully it will be soon.!!!!

Awesome start of this story.

YOU MUST NOT READ A LOT, THIS STORY,

HAS BEEN DONE SOOOOOO MANY TIMES.

MOST READERS KNOW IT BY HEART,

TRY SOMETHING NEW, THEN GET BACK

TO US.

stopped reading at “9 inch girth”. ridiculous

Don't write yet another stolen situation. Come up with something unique that you thought up on your own. I got it, this story has been played out and you tried to make it your own. Many of us have read the same thing over and over again. How about something besides a camping trip, a ride home from college, or an oops I heard mom in the bathroom. Hell at this point I would take a " my mom grew up with brittney spears" story. -_-

Of rape

My mom picked me up at the airport and we started making out in the car. She moved her car far away from any of the other cars. We both got naked from the waist down and I mounted my mom. Her pussy was wet as I pushed my hard cock into her warm and wet love tunnel. I opened my mom's shirt so I could pull her tits out over her bra. I started fucking her hard and fast. We both were moaning and breathing hard. "Harder baby, fuck me harder," my mom cried out! I started pounding her pussy, smacking her clit with my pelvis each time.

Story is good, granted as the others said its not entirely original but that doesn't mean to stop. Keep going with your series and make it your own spin, dont let haters stop you from writing the way you want and what you want.

I think it's great so far!

the theme has been done before but the does not mean that it isn't good.

i would like to see more, keep up the good work!

Who the hell cares if the setting has been done before? I like this setup, and you have plenty of changes to mix things up on later chapters if you want. Keep going.

Take the criticism and use it to better your ability to write your future chapters of this story.

Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Good Luck!!

That sure was a waste of everyone’s time.

did you come up with that plot all by yourself?

Not fun when the blurb says they fuck and you discover all they do is jack off

I liked the different twist on a story that’s been used before. If they don’t like the car stories they don’t have to read it. Only problem was it took like 2 minutes to read it. I got into the story and it was over.

Son and mom first time, mom son father 3 some, family swingers/orgies....OMG !!!!!

Every son should be allowed to have sex with his mother. Oral first, then regular sex. And even better if mom gets pregnant!

Please continue

I didn't read much. The introduction is horrible. I just thought how ugly is the dude if he's at college with a bunch of young hot sluts and he's perving on his mom.

loved the way it happened..lets hear more of what she knowingly does to her son

Please please continue

Akarom a folytatást

Every mom should blow their sons let them fuck their cunts and ass even let them knock up their own mom

More, more

I've read much better versions of the mother and son doing it in the back of the car with the dad dirving. 2/5 stars.

I am with the anon that has read better stories of these particular setting, nonetheless your writing is good

I liked it as a mother of 3, one is my son ( 15) I would love to feel this Too .

More please no father only the mc and mom and more girls make it a harem

So, I gave 2. Sad to say, but your story makes little sense even in the world of disbelief common with the "dad drives while Mom and I bang in the back seat" sub-genre that is often used. A five-hour trip turns is now entering hour six and they are only only halfway home because of traffic? The level of stop-and-go needed for that would make it difficult to just pass out. After no real build, the MC stands up in a minivan - which is no easy feat for people of average height, let alone the likely size of a young man with a 9-inch dick.He'd have to then bend over the mother to get his dick even close enough to basically blast only her mouth and face with cum. All because the MC didn't want to get cum on his shorts? His mother's face was the logical next option? And the dad just doesn't notice anything at all?

The writing is decent if not cliche, but the situation is completely unbelievable. I understand it's difficult to give a good story in a sub-genre with so many 4.50 star and better ones, but part of what makes those stories good is while highly unlikely, they don't push realism completely out the van. They keep enough of it mixed in. Please keep writing, though. I'm just one man's opinion.

I didn't leave a score as I was unsure if this was comedy or your idea of erotic, or both. If the next chapter is going to be 'crazy', I'm looking forward to reading it.

Best way having mom swallow plus should of cum on her face between her eyes.i did that to my mom and rubbed my cum on her face and into her eyes and hair.

Copy, type send......copy type send.....

This story is on it's 111th rewrite.

9" huh? or is that your age? Cum in an unsuspecting mouth....I don't think so.

Stand up in a mini-van......I don't think so.

Keep dreaming and grow up

can't wait for part 2

Plzz I beg for part two

great sleeeping mom story