All Comments on 'Mom Craves Son's Attention'

a great story!

Too many pages of what a stellar athlete you were, how you were going to be everyone's meal ticket and then nothing. The interactions between the mother and son were so far beyond reality I couldn't finish the story, how this achieved a 4.5 is beyond me. The standards are pretty low today.

I loved it. Perhaps you could have a little less sports stuff and more about how mom had to help him shower, dress, etc. that eventually led up to sex but it was still hot. Five stars and a favorite point!

Really good story and decently laid out, However, having a couple of knee surgeries, the last thing I wanted to do was be on my knees, even after 5 months. I cringed at that thought and immediately lost interest.

This story was well written and balanced. The pace was good and character development had good depth and sensitivity. I enjoyed the story, but having blonds in the family I prefer the term "honey" blond to "dirty" blond. Otherwise, all observations are positive.

Thanks for an entertaining story.

These are stories of fantasy not fact. Inconsistencies do make for mental jolts though. When the writer looses continuity of the story or changes a reference, the reading pleasure Is interrupted and sours the milk so to speak. The first glaring one for me was changing the bedroom from Mom’s to Steve’s. After finishing reading I did go back to verify that the change took place. This and other jolts dropped you from a 5 to a 4. Don’t stretch our credibility too much. Missionary is hell on the knees. If Mom straddled Steve it would be believable. Stating that Steve’s knees were healing very well and that he could squat and kneel without pain would be a good precursor to a missionary position.

How the injury was sustained is actually irrelevant but you take up large parts of the story with it and lost my interest.

wish there was a second chapter 5 stars

This was wonderful. You showed both characters with great depth. This is a real 5+ story!!

...beautiful! You magnificently covered all the main bases of a mother/son relationship: lust, love, and fidelity.

I loved the story but your slip ups were confusing, such as his kneeling after major surgery and I did notice the part where you said it was taking place in his bedroom vs the mothers bedroom. But other than that it was a very well written piece. You did capture the lust and wanting between them.

Please write more chapters. We need more now, especially when the Sister gets involved...

Roy Maynard fucks his own 74 year old mother Anna Ludlow in Mt Vernon Indiana

5 stars great story ignoring the tiny mistakes you would have noticed if you had read though it before posting

Crazy63 he's an only child,but a future gf that swings both ways would be good for the future generations

Very good story gave it 5 stars! But you needed to continue and find out what happens next do they continue as lovers does he get to play sports does she get pregnant??????????????

Great story but you should have written more to see if he gets his mom pregnant and if he can continue to play sports. 5 stars

There are so many stories, fictional and otherwise that begin with "She was the head cheerleader and he was the high school football captain and their marriage was terrible". Seems to me the kids this beautiful union would produce, at least in real life would make progressively more attractive and idiotic children generation by generation until western civilization was reduced to a bunch of hot chimps flinging doodoo and humping each other into extinction.

Say isn't the current Presidency being decided between a syphilitic racist ignorant fiendish orange chunky old rapist who was very popular in school and couldn't find his asshole with both hands and a flashlight and the 'doddering but well meaning older man' who narrowly beat him in the last election? The same man who, despite all the other madmen and nincompoops who swore he won the election last time two years into the Presidency even though they had already championed the guy who's brilliant strategy to steal that same election was to commit 91 criminal acts, convince a mob to threaten the life of his Vice President by hanging him in effigy and then refuse to admit reality even as his own party was forced to begrudgingly, but briefly, do so on his behalf to prevent the world's dumbest coup?

The same man who killed several million people worldwide because he lied about the severity of a debilitating and deadly virus that counted himself among the most endangered group and nearly died yet he and his increasingly ridiculous band of yes men and opportunistic sociopaths and morons spent almost all of his Presidency and most of the current 'Doddering but well meaning old man in Chief's Presidency spreading his idiotic nonsense about it not being a problem while their own party was gutted by the disease they all got together to massively mishandle and lie about while making crazy eyes at the well educated doctors who kept trying to convince them to wear a mask and take a shot so they could not die (while they too were among those most likely to do so)?

Nah. Better keep ignoring those less attractive and confident smart people and try and bang the dumb hot ones. That is a strategy that's going places!