All Comments on 'Mom Gives the Best Gifts Ch. 01'

So erotic from the beginning when he positioned his sheet to give mom a good view. The sight of a hard on is one of the best ways to seduce. A mother and sin that truly deserve each other's love.

How long til he knocks her up??

Very hot & very well written. My mom used to tease me by allowing me to watch her change clothes, take peaks down her top as she bent over & use her panties for a while. But she never gave me a birthday gift quite like this.

Loved the story and the closeness they show each other. Looking forward to reading more or other stories along this line. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Loved the story but is it his 21st birthday or 18th ? You said 21 but also said going back into birth canal he left 18 years ago. Lucky boy either way

Sorry about the confusion, I changed some things and forgot to change the age from 18 to 21. Got so lost in the storyline that I forgot to check the numbers.

I would love to see this story continue.

This is well written story, a few typo's but no bigger.

I hope The story of Monica and Daniel will continue.

Loved the part of Monica wearing a Garter Belt, Stockings and Stiletto's. So Hot and Erotic. hope she will wear them in following chapters.

Please continue!!!!

Awesome story sure wish my mom had given me her body or a nice blowjob as a birthday gift one year be it 18, 21, 25, 30, 40?

So, is he 21 or 18?

Great story and an ideal length - the story, that is.

In some paragraphs you have used more than one verb tense, something you need to avoid.

That, and a few little things here and there that a Proof Reader would/should identify. When you have a Proof Reader, insist on discussions of their findings. These will assist you in fine-tuning your writing.

These stories seem so naturally written, a gift that I am glad you share with your readers.