by deviantdove
So many times offspring will not give in to signals being sent by a parent. Similar to my mother and myself except we teased for three years before we made love.
Yes it was totally unbelievable but totally hot a*4* from me , some interaction from mom would have made it a *5* for me!
Loved the story though I wished the mom had participated more and made her mouth available to suck their cocks. They could have spit roasted her then. Five stars and a favorite point!
as expected the boys had a rough time getting into the idea of fucking her but once they got started it was all systems go so i hope their will be a few more chapter for this story.
Man u sure know how to elevate the lustfulness of a son for his mom. Really a great story.looking forward to more chapters or similar themed stories soon.
Man u sure know how to elevate the lustfulness of a son for his mom. Really a great story.looking forward to more chapters or similar themed stories soon.
I saw my mother 1 time when I walked in there bedroom . Mom was on the bed with her legs apart. She was playing with herself I watched for about 2 min. then backed and slipped out of the bedroom
too much like rape. With Mom saying nothing I would have left the room.
Totally weird fantasy and strangely erotic. Author has a unique style that repelled me and stirred my lust at the same time. This made it a 4 for me.
What a story! I got as horny as Mitch and Kyle reading this story.
Imagine that big, white ass gleaming at you, pointing that wet, neglected pussy your way at the age when you could cut diamonds with your erection and do it all night long. Who could resist?! Good one bro.
Fuck it. In this exact situation I would have probably done the same. Good story 5+
People are way too nice in the comments of a lot of stories, this had promise but the dialogue is so robotic "I am fucking her!" "I am cumming" etc..who talks like that? I'm, we're, they're are used 99% of the time by humans you will never hear "I am going to the store, I am getting milk they are having a sale" from anyone especially an 18 year old "I'm going to the store, I'm getting milk they're having a sale" really ruins a story and you see it a lot on Literotica, makes me wonder about the author and how that could possibly sound like dialogue from anything other than a droid or some kind of crappy AI like seriously do you talk like that? " I will write robo dialogue but it is how the humans speak I think and I will have the human persons read the robo words and they will be pleased that I am so good at human speaking" you have the potential to do much better
After some time I once again remembered and revisited this story. Still remains as one of my absolute favorites.
Congrats and many thanks to the author.