All Comments on 'Mom, My Sister, and Me Ch. 02'

Great story so far. Chapter one was the best but now, for chapter two, we need to finish up with what goes down (no pun intended) after Trish suggests "we all go up to my room". It can only get better so pick up your pen and go for it.

Oh my! Great series, please continue. I love the idea of all of them moving in together some were and continuing this relationship.

Well Its interesting.but now a waste of my time.where does it go from here?

good story but where is the next chapter?

finish this

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Please dont leave the story lingering.

Please finish this story. Its so good, but it needs a 3rd chapter.

What a hot sexy story. Love to read the next few chapters.

I agree you have finish this story

You have to continue this story ......................

love this one so far. but it needs completion.

I need to take a break and get some relief

Its a great story. I really am eager for part 3. Great writing man. Keep it up

I hope that you are going to write more very soon, need too know what happens.

I agree , can't to wait to read part 3

great story looking forward to the rest of it

Continue ur story its not even over

Like so many others, the "to be continued" just does not happen. I would think another chapter, or the completed story, could be finished in the near decade since posted. So many stories are like that here on Lit... Too bad, many are great stories that died an unnatural death.

Am in a restaurant on my laptop........about to explode amongst crowded eaters....and you stopped me dead.......Hurry up and finish ..would you?

Great story, hope there is more to follow

this was a good story but the asshole wannabe writer never finished it that seems to be a trend on this site the writers get you hooked then drop it very sadistic the webmasters need to start removing unfinished stories

keep it coming!

Amazing stuff and gramatically great as well. But what happens when Mom gets to Jennifer's bed? With your imagination, it's got to rate a 110% feedback. Please do another chapter soon!

This exchange is VERY HOT! It's like phone sex with women you can see. Very sex!

Nookiehunter

awesome but unprotected sex with trish should lead to baby and marriage. i mean he cant marry his mother or sister and trish seems like anatural choice.

I will have to agree, it was writen quite well. I also see you haven't writen much lately. I think you should finish your story. It was great. I can't wait to see what happens next.

What a nice change to read an erotic story written in proper English. Heartfelt thanks for a story that is both 'readable' and hugely arousing. The two are of course not unconnected. There is nothing arousing about a semi-literate narative, no matter how erotic the content. Neither is there anything arousing about a brilliantly written text where everything erotic is left to the imagination. I for one will be keeping a sharp eye out for the remaining chapters, and I hope you get as much pleasure from writing as I did from reading.

i can not wait for the next installment!! Great work!

I personally thought that this was better than My Evil Wife, My Loving Daughter Chapters 1&2 and The Clothes We wore. After reading Mom, My Sister, and Me Ch. 01, I came looking to see if there was a chapter 02. Lucky for me, I found the sequel. I would like to see more stories in this style. I'm eagerly awaiting Chapter 3.

can't wait to read the rest...

i would love to read more of this story . please write more of this story

this story was great. Just had to stay and read it all.

looking foward to the rest.

Curtis