All Comments on 'Mom Saves Prom'

This story 'desperately needs' an English use age proofreading !! In it's current shape it is so noticeable that it ALMOST makes a person want to stop reading mid-paragraph !!

Another whore mother, wanting young cock, doesn't matter whose.

So, turns out Mom is a Slut, and you don't have to get her drunk first. Awesome!

Congratulations for the best prom of your lives ,she is every sweet mom

Great concept and your writing style is fine but you need to pick a person. At one point you are writing in first person, character talking about himself

then you switch to third person character talking about another as if they knew what they were thinking and feeling.

I hope part 2 is soon.