by SM402
For your sake, I hope English is your second language. The grammar was horrendous. You seriously need to get a good editor!
I hoped this would be better. The mom uses sex to keep her son home, then wants to be his sex slave. This could have been very erotic, but the presentation makes it less so.
i dont know how a shit story get 4 star average. i think there is lots of shit minded people here like this writer .
Iam glad to see you quit, your writting was killing me. And I gave you every chance, I read all your stories. They never got better. good luck at what ever you try....... Just don't quit your day job.