All Comments on 'Mom, the Unwilling Slut Ch. 02'

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ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 5 years ago
WASTE OF TIME ^*!

SAME AS CH. 01:

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Jumped the shark...

First story was interesting. But you went too far, too fast. Lost the intrigue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Pity no more chapters are coming, with the farther in on it a whole new story line opened.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Ugggg

This was so good and started to go downhill when the sugarbabe was let go with no revenge and the introduction to others while the mother was not broken in fully at home I wont even get on the subject of dad being so into it after being called out and apparently ingratiating in the dynamic flawlessly? The father should have been divorced and tossed into the cold with his sluts laughing in his face not with the cliffhanger of getting the daughter and the mother because he is apparently some alpha male laying dormant while the son did the most work on the family thus far

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
~*Shakes head in disgust*~

Anyone claiming to be a Dominate, who behaved the way you've taken this story, would be blackballed for life, around the Lifestylers I run with.

I'd suggest you learn about a topic, before you create another train wreck.

Huge difference between someone worthy of the title Dominant, and a rapist.

I won't let my wife write what she had to say about it...she's not allowed to use that kind of language outside a scene.

I've been active in the lifestyle for better than 30 years, so I do know what I'm talking about.

If you'd left the scene out of the story, I wouldn't have said a thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked it interesting story.all would like to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it man! More,more,more!!!!!!

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