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This story had a nice start & incredible setting . Secluded van in a beautiful spot . The unfolding events happened to quickly and abruptly . We would have enjoyed a slow build up ….slow deep kissing and eventually fondling etc . Maybe some reluctance on mom’s part ? To build tension and eventual surrendering over a long seduction ? Too short and too fast but a great idea for future stories . Dating with a mommy stuff .
This needs much better proof reading. The use of site instead of sight is just one example. Also, it ended very abruptly as if the story just stopped in the middle.
Surely a "site" is something like a building site, new buildings going up, or a site of historical interest. Something like a bald pussy seen through her thighs would be a fantastic SIGHT.........??