by Ignoble
Ok this was definitely not 1 of your better stories no build up the mother was way too demanding and controlling it was just a poorly written story all the way across
Really enjoyed the plot. Though I would like to see a revision, eventually, as you hurried through the intimate scenes and those could have used more details along with how Trisha felt while her mother brazenly took her. I have some of your other stories and know you can be descriptive about a scene between two women.
Not masterly. Rape. She wasn't going to protest to her mother. Most especially in family sex, consent must be obtained. Mother is using her authority to control her daughter. If Constance wishes to be a Mistress she needs to find some willing partners to be her subs. I don't particularily see the attraction, myself, to sexual power games but if that is your thing its best not to use your children. Have consentual sex with them if they are adults, but don't use your authority to cow them under so that they feel they must service their parent.
Totally H-O-T but you also developed the characters a bit within the scope of what little you had posted. Any chance of more?
my niece dress in body painting for Halloween look so beautiful for her first college halloween party.that body paint won't come off skin she had a lot of trouble getting the paint off. So she ask for help taking body paint off. I used some Grease Monkey Wipes whent paint came of she had that most amazing athletic body i seen, I notice that her nipples hard
great story with great followup possibilitiese
hope we can expect more
Hot and nasty. I'd to see more of this family. Daughter and father slaved to nasty mom.
and then BANG the mother's making the moves on the daughter with no warning or build-up completely out of the blue. Groan.
Just what I like in a quick little rub story.
Could be a great series, hopefully theres a part two,
Cos I would love to won a pussy girl!
Would have been nicer with a little more description during the "next few minutes", but otherwise very well done. Can't wait for more of Momma's Pussy.
First, I would like to express my thanks for consuming your time & energy submitting in Literotica, my favorite site so far.
Your skill of detailed discribing in characters & scenes is good, I think.
But it's very difficcult for me to guess that this is likely to happen or exist. That's the most important necessity in great work whatever the work is. Please refer to the work of Ms.Selena Kitt, Ms.Erica Sloane etc. It will be good for you to find out the differrences between you and the good pro writers.
Erotica fan from half the world away.
Would love to see what Mommy has in store for her little Pussy next :)
the title of this comment is self explanatory. That mom needs to go to a mental hospital
Very sexy story. The whirlwind and euphoria of lust. Very nicely put. Would probably have gone for fingering the daughter to a first orgasm, and building to the dildo (obviously one for dad's ass) and enjoying the Dom mom educating daughter for longer.
I would have preferd to have mommy used her huge strap on (what size is it) on her daughters ass instead of her pussy that first time...
Wish Mommy would bring her little pussy Trick or Treating by my house....
Very nice descriptive little tale. I think that Trisha should take pity on her Daddy though, don't you?
Pity about 'bowel'; shit comes out of mine, not sweets. Also the word is NOW, not KNOW.
Very nice and unsuual. Be nice in Mummy had some friends to share her pussy with!