All Comments on 'Mommy Issues'

I Love naughty home cumming's

& true Love!....

...is fucking first then finding out their related. Excellent story, definitely a 5.

Another sweet, loving tale of mother and son discovery!

Thanks again for this and your many other contributions here. I'm especially fond of your "renovation" stories.

Surely that's not the end...

Great story but if this ends as one chapter i wish id not read it as it would be disappointing not to know more chapters are to follow

Thanks to those that read and enjoyed. I had only planned this to be a short one chapter, don't think there's enough story there for much more. Boatbumm, I hope you picked up the "renovation" link with the attic, in fact this story contained the most nods to my other works (4 in total including one unpublished). Anyway, thanks to those who left feedback.

And it took me back immediately to the closing line of "Delightful Renovation" and the sweet loving that came alive in that house. ;-)

Of course we'd all love more along this road you're leading us down -- but "Reacquainted" is another worthy contender for a follow-up story.

I love and wait for your work. This one seems rushed and confused: slightly formulalic in design of a mother/son discovery story. I loved your reconstruction stories, but totally missed the link to the magic found in reconstructed houses that brought the brother/sister and and mother/son together.

Like others, I believe this story needs another chapter to flush out the back story of the reconstruction and how Alice and Travis were effected by its magic, etc.

great sex scenes. as you know, i love your stories, and think you are a terrific writer. i just thought this was a little predictable from the beginning. and maybe i'm a romantic, but finding your mom as a whore? i'm not sure. i knew where it was going from the outset. the story was well-written and executed, you write excellent dialogue between the 2. i gave it 5 stars - but if i didn't know how great all your other stuff was maybe i wouldn't have!!!

I think you should consider sequel's to some of your other stories - "Reacquainted" with Lauren and Natalie in a 3some on mexico, Evelyn and Cain a couple years later snaeking around, or "Life's a Beach" back home - that story has legs as well. its just my 2 cents worth - and i doubt my advice is worth that much!!! but........i'd love to read those stories!!!

Cheers for the comments and observations and thanks for the continued support mybikecruises, goducks and others. I tend to agree with gripes about this one. I don't know how long other contributors spend on each story but I'm pretty slow and although short, this one took at least five hours, maybe a little more with proofreading. I'd love to produce some more chapters of my other titles but like most, time to write is limited and I try to put down the idea in my head as soon as possible. Delightful Renovation is definitely at the top of my list for more chapters but as I love the storyline I want to give it adequate attention. Thanks for the suggestions guys and again, thanks for reading my stuff.

Another absolute triumph!

Absolutely loved this story! Wish it was me. Very realistic!

It sad and Beautiful all at once !

I loved this story. Your writing is special because it has good character development, which in a category that’s so psychological (mommy issues lol) is really important. I look forward to reading more of your work— I’ve already read a few of your stories! Keep it up and keep up the psychological element in your writing, for me at least it is the strongest point in altogether well-written stories.

I'd love to hear about their life together in LA.

Hollywood Blvd. Is in the US, Car Parks are a UK, they're called Parking Lots here. Other than those pieces of info, perfect.

Hope you will like it👍

Absolutely wonderful but I could have done without him cumming all over her in the restroom. I loved how you have Lauren Brooks in this story after I read Reacquainted, great writing. I am seriously living your writing.

What a fucking amazing story. Eternal love is hard to find but them seemed to.

Thank you for sharing your stories with us. You are awesome!

... I didn't have a clue where this was going until we found out about her history.

Great story. Thanks again for your efforts.

I'm working my way down your list of stories. Are we going to find out about the unnamed lady who watched from the doorway? I certainly hope so.

You know I have written her into another of my stories but I'm fucked if I know which!! It is mentioned though, somewhere, as a recollection.

I love this story so much. I keep coming back to it. Not only is it sexy but it also... touches my heart?? Like, the muffin detail is just perfect. I dunno. Nice mix of taboo and emotion

Now THAT was a true mother/son love story.

I usually hate these kind of stories but this was written so well and sensitive. Full Mars! 5-Stars!

Wonderful story, very well written and told, but I am curious if there is a story coming about the un-named lady that witnessed the two..............():\

Wonderful story of how life has a way of drawing to people together that were meant to be. Rather abrupt ending. Curious as to who the voyeur is. As you have said before, all of your stories have some common thread, I'll have to read more of on to find out. 5⭐

Just wonderful. Although I also would have liked to have known about the unknown woman....

I love this story. i only wish it had a pregnancy aspect to it in the end... sunburycd do you have any stories where the son gets his mother pregnant? that would be the best.

@mohdnabeel Brief mention in A Fiery Affair.