All Comments on 'Mommy Needs My Help Ch. 04'

I admire an uninhibited family

Now you are just reaching for shit. Bail out on the series.

wow, went totally off the rails... Have to give it a 2

hot enough action, and I could almost accept that mommy was getting "comfortable" with the four cornered arrangement - perhaps even willing to bring it all into the open, but when dad didn't react to the parting kiss ya lost me

Sorry if m spelling is strong title.

Can't wait to read more vey hot!!!!

You did this with another series. You had a good rhythm going and then you fuck it up with something that doesn't need to be there. Two stars. It would have been three but this isn't as good as the other parts.

I liked the series but it got way too confusing trying to keep up with all the body positions she was describing watching her husband and sister.

It was fine without the father cheating but since it was added there should be a payback like make her sister become the mom and son’s personal slave or have proof of cheating divorce and still own the little sister just so the father won get to keep her.

Great story. U have finish this story with what happens next. Please don't leave us in suspense. More chapters ,like 5,6,7,8 & 9. Ty

You've build a story with great mechanics, believable characters and plot, and good timing (neither too little nor too much sex and a decent amount of time between happenings.) Could use a bit more description of their non-sex life to make the people more realistic. Great job, thank you.

Feels like other stories you write, unfinished.

There is no real conlusion other that she is finally able to really cheat on her husband but only because he cheats on her.

Left like this it is a load of crap.We need to know what she did about her husband and her sister.

Great story great to read the mother got her satisfaction in the end and enjoyed the pleasure as well.

Where is the next part? Surely this isn't the end, where is the revenge on her sister? Great she can finally have her sex and cheat on her husband, but come on really she is just going to let her sister go like that? Seems like you built this story up then just gave up.

Great story but another chapter is needed

What woman wouldn’t exert some sort of retribution to a husband that

shags her sister especially since he disregarded their anniversary dinner.

I thought she was planning to get caught in the kitchen with Matthew.

She could have said when her husband fumed at what he saw

“Touché for last night at my sister’s”

His reaction to discover his wife had caught him would have been priceless.

Her anger surely would have taken precedence over her fantasy.

Waiting for next part. Son dad share mum.mother sister join this.

I think you didn't finish it, as I think her sister needs a wake up call along with her husband. This prime divorce as the next step. I think that the wife should pack up his shift and leave it at the door and get her lawyer to draw up the divorce papers and take him to the cleaners. He needs to pay as well as the sister.

Yea- revenge! but damn-we're all fucking around, especially guitarists!

Story was good until this chapter 4 where it suddenly switched to mother's narrative and most crucially the useless introduction of her husband's fling with her sister, completely destroyed the tempo built during previous chapters. Talk about self-destruction!!

people seem to forget ch. 1 was largely from mom's POV also, this author is just really confused and incapable of writing in the 3rd person.

Needs depth, less fucking for fucking sake. As if they all cared for each other on some level.

There’s still time to clean this up in the last upcoming chapter

Disregard my previous comment and read your email I sent.

Still want chapter 5, tho…

Damn you really dropped the ball on the ending of this story sorry but no wife is going to stand by and let there husband fuck there sister not even in a fansty

Liked this chapter but the sex was all rushed you need to continue and have mom tell her husband she caught him with her sister and have her divorce him and continue her sexual feelings for her son!! Gave it a 4 did not like the ending!!!!!!!!!!!

1xstar. What a cop out. Left hanging. No revenge very dissappointing

Well that was disappointing the way the last 2 chapters read sounded like it could be good but damn really she finds out the reason her husband is never home is cause he is fucking her sister could have set it up where she gets revenge or set up to where the son finds out about his dad's affair and takes it upon himself to get revenge on him for his mom that way the ending wouldn't have been so disappointing you have decent ability in some of your stories on a good start and middle but you lack the ability to close

Dark forever don't give him that idea it would just screw it up even more than what it already is cause rather it is a fantasy or not and rather or not she is fucking her son no woman much less wife is going to stand by and let her husband fuck her sister and be ok with it much less wanna have a threesome with her husband and son or husband and sister or even son and sister cause that kind of betrayal from her sister by fucking her husband is almost as bad as if the mom would have betrayed her son

Auspat2021 what satisfaction did she get in the end sure she got the pleasure though as rushed as it was I don't see how but she didn't get any satisfaction not after catching her husband fuck her sister on there anniversary really her anger would have out done her fantasy in that situation this writer dropped the ball and screwed up what could have been a decent story

Dam another one that could use another chapter. Good story over all.

Silly last chapter.

Husband let’s her down on celebration date.

She finds out he preferred to spend it fucking her sister.

She would have been incandescent with rage.

Instead she gives him a blow job when he returns. Nobody would do that.

Yup, agree with consensus - story lacks closure.