by HarleyRiderX
Nice premise, keep it up. I’m looking forward to reading more of your work
Really good. Odd perspective shift in the Prologue from first person to third and then back to first person.
Your question, should you continue this story. I leave a very large vote of YES. I like this first installment very much. Look forward to more.
I read the first few paragraphs immediately came to the last page to say. " You lost me at 18 yr old son Marshall" and "Mommy".. he's 18.. wtf Is he saying Mommy for.. ughh sounds like he's 10
Kind of f ind it hard to understand what happened to make the mom a sub slut
Good storyline - but I really would like it to also tell how he got his mother to be a cum-slut.
It feels like I'm dumped down in a good store - but have no knowledge of the essential past.
A GREAT start to a very good story! I hope you grace us with additional chapters. I look forward to reading about the son converting the lesbians int cock sluts!
OMG!!! I can't believe that there isn't a second part to this story yet! It is an awesome story and I was really looking forward to reading the next chapters! It really could be a never ending story!