All Comments on 'Mommy's Boy'

by HarleyRiderX

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lets get one of the pregnant !

lituser12354lituser12354over 2 years ago

Nice premise, keep it up. I’m looking forward to reading more of your work

mnemnethmnemnethover 2 years ago

Yes continue! Love it well written 👏

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really good. Odd perspective shift in the Prologue from first person to third and then back to first person.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing

Lionheart61Lionheart61over 2 years ago
Continue

Your question, should you continue this story. I leave a very large vote of YES. I like this first installment very much. Look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I read the first few paragraphs immediately came to the last page to say. " You lost me at 18 yr old son Marshall" and "Mommy".. he's 18.. wtf Is he saying Mommy for.. ughh sounds like he's 10

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Keep going...this can turn out excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story!! Hopefully you follow up on this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Kind of f ind it hard to understand what happened to make the mom a sub slut

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good storyline - but I really would like it to also tell how he got his mother to be a cum-slut.

It feels like I'm dumped down in a good store - but have no knowledge of the essential past.

Master_MelvinMaster_Melvinover 2 years ago

You need to finish what you start

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A GREAT start to a very good story! I hope you grace us with additional chapters. I look forward to reading about the son converting the lesbians int cock sluts!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

OMG!!! I can't believe that there isn't a second part to this story yet! It is an awesome story and I was really looking forward to reading the next chapters! It really could be a never ending story!

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