All Comments on 'Mommy's Dirty Laundry'

Mothers are always the best teachers.

Pretty good story but PLEASE either write in 3rd person or 1st person.....NO BOTH and run spellcheck. Other than that...pretty good.

PLEASE ....... Don't be like some writters who wind US up, then never finish. Will be looking for part 2 .Also get a proof reader,makes it easier to read. Thanks

Find an editor or someone that can help you with writing. I had problems with the first paragraph and it only got worse from there. No rating from me.

Stay in 1st or 3rd person, and don't change from past to present tense.

Still Hot

loved your story, made me hard from just

from reading it, hopefully you will continue

to finish it I gave you a 4 star rating

Ekim

i had to stop reading i can't imagine a doctor that could not read or write as poorly as this was written...i can believe a high school kid can write better... so that must make you a middle school level and not a writer....sorry but the only way to get better is if someone tells you to take a course and learn to spell and proper grammar

Definitely a hot story and I would love to read more. I usually don't care about grammar but there were so very bad ones but I did not have any trouble enjoying it.

If you don't like the story or how its written,then don't fucking read it and quit busting the guys balls. Atleast he wrote a hot fucking story! Continue my good man and they don't like then FUCK 'EM