All Comments on 'Mommy's Help Ch. 04'

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hammer17hammer17over 16 years ago
Good story

I think I wouldn't jack off and tell the Doctor than mom didn't collect a sample in a cup today. Even though she DID get a sample, she didn't put in a cup, so no lie there. Then the Doctor could ask mommy why she didn't help him collect a sample that day, a little pay back for the boss thing at the elevator....

Reverse_CowboyReverse_Cowboyover 16 years ago
Pretty good

You have a good story here, you just need to proof read more so you catch your typos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice Work

I like the storyline. Keep going with it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Never.

See thats what cums when you speak with your mouthful.Why is moms pussey apparently on fire?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Getting Hotter

It seems to me that mom is getting a hot arse,I am not surprised keep playing around with a stiff dick,sons or not.Its now just a matter of time isnt it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Lets crank it up a bit

Maybe it;s time for him to take some nude pictures so the few times she isn't available he has something to look at. A good cum covered face might excite him. It woud me!

ny123456ny123456over 16 years agoAuthor
CHAPTER 5

CHapter 5 has been entered... should take about 2 days to get approved! Thanks... please leave comments..

Also will appreciate some emails from REAL mothers' to get some information for future stories... Mommyshelp24@yahoo.com

ny123456ny123456over 16 years agoAuthor
Hammer17..

Thanks for idea "Hammer17" hope you enjoy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Honest To God....

... I didn't think your protagonist could get ANY dumber, but it appears I was wrong. What a fucking moron! You wrote this: "How could mom be so vindictive with her own son?">>>>Better question is, "How could he be such a dumbshit?">>>>Oh yeah, before I forget, get yourself an EDITOR! PLEASE!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Absolutely fucking disgusting id fucking spit that whit in her face and throw up. Ugh this made me vomit in my mouth a bit totally killed the story for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hope they fuck soon

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

Son is finally learning. It should be great when he realizes his mother is a woman.

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaosabout 1 month ago

His mom is a piece of work for sure.

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