All Comments on '"Moms & Daughters": A Family Affair'

Sadly, this is boring, repetitive and meandering. There is very little story here. It offers nothing imaginative or engaging.

I would like to have read about Amanda fucking/dominating her dad. It's the next step in her character ark..

Pretty long and not much different happening as it moved along, but the illustrations are absolutely ball-bustingly good. I bookmarked the story just so I can go back and enjoy them.

Like others before me said love the story and really enjoy the artwork!

Great story and artwork

Wonderful story. Loved the artwork too.

Love love LOVED this story! Where can I find a daughter slut to cunt lick worship her mummy ?! Haha loved it thx for sharing xx

Wow, just wow! Loved reading about hot women taking charge and living their lives as they pleased! Well done Jasmin!!

It's fun to see an illustrated story of utter depravity; very hot

Probably not the first to see this but: in the 5th paragraph from the end, shouldn’t it read “ the daughter of a high ranking woman in the British government “? Instead of “ high ranking daughter”

It was OK. GOT ME IN THE MOOD SEVERAL TIMES. Wish I could write yarns like Jasmin can.

Great story it just got better an better as I read into it …

The story was fabulous,but got kind of repetitive in the last couple of chapters. Time yo retire this one.

I fall asleep reading the stories as I finger myself to sleep

Absolutely amazing beautiful layout had to reread some parts to get the characters right after that no problem putting myself in the characters place seams you have natural talent for this style of writing thanks

Fun! But a little bit confusing with so many participants. I was looking forward to a man becoming the master, but unfortunately, he became a victim. Hard to believe (even though I love pussy).that it is such a powerful stimulus for so many. It is, however, the best way to a woman’s orgasm that these ladies seem to enjoy at every encounter.

Just loved this story. Very hot, pictures added a lot as well

I would like to read 📚 and see 👀 more pictures 📸 📷 🖼 🤳, parts, pages, and chapters of this book 📖 to see if Chloe and Amanda carry on the tradition to their daughters and granddaughters or not.

What a wonderfully fun story. I wish I lived near a community like you describe.

Absolutely monumental, l have six sisters who are all over 18 who all fuck and eat each other’s cunts every day /night. They collect cunt juice from each other in a glass for me to drink while I play with you cock while watching them play with each other. We all got a little drunk one weekend and they let me lick their clits till they orgasmed and I passed out from sexual over load. They then made me watch while they had a girly daisy chain, making me cum and nearly pass out again. Cunt crazed fucker U.K. More and more like this Jasmine please.

Was hoping to see more with the secretary from work, even in the work setting. Which would be domme? Perhaps a future vignette.

You have a really nasty imagination. I love it!

Why is it that good, kind men always get abused by fucking slutty women?

Can't a wife who stays home and does nothing appreciate and love her husband?

Oh Jasmin another great story.. I wish I was your male pet.. k

love the lesbian stories so satisfying.from grandma to niece, it sure makes me feel good. i had to read this entire series before quitting for the day. i'm sure i would make an excellent pet.

You're a wonderful writer and you give me vagina envy. There's nothing else to say.

I genuinely LOVED this Story!! GREAT Work!!

Only thing I Might have changed would have been the corruption of Young, 18 yr old, Deborah (with her Neighbor), and 18 yr old Amanda. by giving each them their own Mind blowing orgasm; making them MORE 'compliant'/less resistant to defiance as Mistress-Mommy & Neighbor FORCED each of them to Eat pussy first.

Very outstanding lesbian story. I find lesbian stories if well written are very erotic to read and very exciting as movies or videos. I do have a problem with the use of the term sluts, not just in this story but in many I have read. The lady (female) is usually one of the strongest contributors in the different stories, but as soon as she has contributed her max, she is suddenly began to be called a slut. It doesn't make sense to receive gratifying satisfaction and then call the one that satisfied a slut.

Great story about lesbian incest. It kept my interest, since I had to go to several appointments while reading it. Loved the planning by Chloe to turn the house hierarchy on its head. Amanda and Chloe are going to turn a lot more teens and MILFs before they leave for college.

Haven't been able to put it down once I started to read it. THANK YOU

You have a talent unlike most, as I have yet to read a bad story by You!

that's all I did for the whole book and I read the entire book in one sitting... I made a lot of awesome sauce as I read..... thanks great story

I'm working on a story that requires pictures. How do you get the images in the story. I really enjoy your stories.

stories of mothers teaching their daughters the joys of making each other happy are my favorites and you have at least two fantastic stories on the subject that i have found thanks do some more if you can love you

Second story I read of yours today. Holding off cumming until wife goes to bed. AmazingAmazing

What a great story - completely 'wrapped-up!'

Superior Females.

The concept of multi-generational lesbian incest and the changing dynamics involved was excellent. I loved the blend in the story of domination, submission, reluctance and seduction. Thank you for this great story.

I congratulate you sincerely my dear silkstockingslover

This story is one of the best I've read about the intense incestuous lesbian relationships of a family and her circle of friends, and is brilliantly illustrated by Rebecca's delightful illustrations. A very inspiring story!

I hope you can create other stories with the other illustrations of Rebecca, on topics of sodomization and BDSM games... there is a great variety!

Loved it. Looking forward to reading all of your stories

good story but let down the dad should of have been more of a man and told them to go to hell and got his stuff and left, he works hard so they can stay home and have sex. if he filled for divorced he could of gotten it all, she was cheating on him.

This is a very good story, but quite a bit repetitive. Towards the end, it was not much more than an effort to guess who was next in the dominance game.

i was really having a great time reading this well written well paced story til the ending,,what a letdown and disappointment,, father is a wimp with a little pecker and relegated to the cellar,,,the guy makes a living so everyone else can stay home and fuck and play,, i don't think so,, bad mistake to put down men that way.

I was truly pulled into the story and instinctively was clinching and releasing my cunt muscles giving me these micro orgasms without me even touching myself.. I was delirious towards the end until the men came home.. Didn't like that part.. Luv

I gave you a four star, because of the ending.

Would have been 5 stars if it had ended with the Dad just joining in.

Please continue I want to know what happens next

I loved the story and it was a real turn on but the ending was really disappointing with the way you had the father being a really big ass wimp. I can't believe that very many men would respond the way he did. I think most fathers would have joined in or threw all of them out into the street... It would really take a real pussy to accept the results that you put in the story...It would have been a much bigger turn on if he had joined in and fucked them and got a blow job.No way in hell would he have gone to the basement in shame and if he was that weak he might as well blow his brains out. What kind of family would treat their loving father that way???? Everything i liked about the women up until the end was destroyed by their cold and uncaring attitude toward the father, son, brother and husband. I can understand the wife turning away and leaving him cold but not his daughters, sisters and mother....really a BAD, BAD ENDING!!!!

Me and my husband absolutely love this....it reminds me of times spent with my mom my sister and my 5 aunts and 4 female cousins......shortly after i turned 18 we all met at my aunt ellens and we had a lesbian orgy...before this i had only had lesbian incest with my sister and 2 of the cousins and my aunt esther...we have a rule of no participation till 18 and you wanna do it....my aunt esther broke the rule but only me her and her daughter kristy knew about it....kristy was 17 and i was 13 and i stayed the night at my aunts....she was gone and me and kristy were hanging out...and kristy began asking me if i had a boyfriend...i told her no...she a a girlfriend...i said heck no....she said why you say it like that...i said that i didnt think that would be interesting...and she said why and i said because its a woman and she doesnt have the right equipment....kristy said be right back....she comes back a few minutes later naked from the waist down wearing a strap on...she says women have better equipment....she sits next to me...i was examining the strap on when i noticed the harness had a split showing her pussy to me...seeing her pussy made me start getting wet....kristy says so you change your mind yet ....i said maybe so...i asked what does it feel like and she said touch it....i reach out touch it and keep my hand there...but as i did i felt my pinky touching her pussy....kristy asked....have you ever had sex....i told her yes...she asked with who....i told her jake and one other person...she said a man??? I said yes she said who...i said i couldnt say...she said did grandpa fuck you too....i asked how she figured that out....she said he fucked her when she was 12...i said he did me at 10 anally 11 vaginally....she said youve never even fooled around with your brother...i said no she said she had fucked her moms boyfriends for the last 3 years....she asked if i wanted to try her strap on....i said yes i guess so but give me a minute....i went to the bedroom and stripped naked....my pussy was dripping wet....kristy then comes in the room naked as well and the strap on in her hand....she said we will use this later i wanna show you something first.....we lay on the bed and begin kissing she is pinching my nipples....then her hands find my wetness....she said fuck you want this dont you....she lays me back and eats my wet slit....her tongue was amazing...she had me cumming in no time...then she strapped on the dildo again...she had me get in whatever position i wanted....i got on all fours...she slid in her dildo and began fucking me....we fucked for bout 25 minutes....till we noticed kristys mom....she said what are you girls doing....kristy says having some fun...esther says kat im gonna get naked and join you and kristy....but you cant tell anyone about this....kristy says yes supposed to wait till your 18...but i been doing this with mom since i was 12....esther then undresses and joins me in the bed kristy lines up and slides the strap on in her moms pussy....while esther ate me....i never told anybody and had only did that with esther just those 5 days i spent the night...but kristy happened a good bit more....me and my sister had been touching each other since i was 8 and she was 9....thanks for bringing back great memories

The story is amazing I loved it

You should think about doing professional writing

A truly hot story. I couldn't keep my hands off of my cock and balls

A little long but so worth it! Makes me want to sit down and write about my real life mother daughter experience! But, unfortunately I managed to get a four year degree without being able to string two coherent sentences together!

Loved it Randi

Turned me on, thanks for another great one!

would like them to be wearing stockings in illustrations

The story was intriguing and kept me interested and wondering what will happen next. The illustrations were perfect for the story. Nicely done for sure.

Keep on writing... really enjoy your stories

The 10 chapters were a praise worthy episode of a new pictorial sensational lesbian-incest filled love fest of obviously heated passionate mother-daughter-grandmother-son integrated into a demonstration of the best of all the vaginal moistening, penis-stiffening, and naughty but oh so nice family of the best incestuous natural and slu-loving cunt-loving , strap on , mother fucking, enjoyable presentation ever put down on script that SILKSTOCKINGLOVER ever impressed me with! I'm so excited about this new version of this tag. The author really out did many of the other stories with deliciously including the pictorial imagination of the hot bitches. Impressively done.

As ever, an erotic tale, with deep; familial; girl on girl incestuous action. The whole story flowed from seduction to seduction almost seamlessly. Enhanced beautifully; I might add; by The spectacular illustrations from Rebecca. Plaudits to both of you, you are remarkably gifted women.

Let me begin by saying I liked the story and loved the illustrations. Now for the critics who picked the story apart for it's lack of realism; this is erotica we're enjoying some of our fantasies and if we're lucky getting material for our jilling off sessions. So relax and try to enjoy these stories for what they are.

Read a page and exercise my right hands grip and thinking you are a very vivid brilliant writer. And the fact the ladies are not cgi makes it so much better.

i am addicted to this story, i read it in the day time now, dont care about getting caught.

The combination of an incredibly hot story with wonderful illustrations make this another top notch effort from one of the best Literotica writers whose works I have ever had the pleasure to read.

Great story. You had me coming while I played with my pussy when reading the story. Write more like this. I really enjoy your work especially when they make me pleasure myself.

Thanks,

Julie.

It's an awesome story :)

A great big thank you to all who read, voted and supported this story to winning 2015 Illustrated story of the year.

A special thank you to Rebecca for her artwork and I'm looking forward to more collaborations with her. (Be sure to check out her work!)

Be sure to check out the first 2 of 12 chapters of 1950s... an epic story that will go through 50 years of lesbian incest in one family.

JASMINE

Way to win another award. This time best illustrated story.

One of your best, personally I always click on any new story written by `silkstockinglover' as I know that I won't be disappointed and that any that are illustrated will have the best illustrations in them. Congratulations on your 200th, hope there are many more to come.

A great adventure told with multiple story lines and beautifully illustrated.

Definitely one of the best

The best, I am still hard

Epic!

i thoroughly enjoyed the story, especially Amanda's transition from sub to more of a dom role. I was mostly just confused at the fact it seemed Chloe took control over mom for the "first time" two separate times which was confusing. otherwise i thought it was awesome!

AWESOME

It's not a novel, but it is "novel"! I loved the pencil sketches - by far the best artist. I assume you had a series of pics and wrote the text to match. That takes skill, either way.

:)

Good writing, good premise but repetitive sameness gets to be boring. The inclusion of the cartoons lighten the writing but cannot cover the repetitive lack of imagination after the first chapter.

Great story. I read every one and was turned on with every word. I hope all the rest of your stories are asgood as this one.

I like this, but I don't love it. The idea is good, but there is just too much, or rather, too many. Why would Chloe wish to domme her mother? It will change the dynamic in the household and like her mother and grandmother, can end in a rift between them. Chloe obviously doesn't want to be a Mistress, she just enjoys the humiliation. She doesn't respect her Subs, and it takes a strong person to be a good sub. This seems to be more about hate and humiliation and power play than sex or love. If Chloe really enjoys the Power Games and Hates and feels the need to Humiliate those she has authority over, why doesn't she just join run for a government office. That way she'd be getting paid to plot, play head games, put down her friends as well as adversaries and dictate the rules of the games. The black and white drawings are very well done during the early portion of the story, the color drawings of approximately page 4 and over have less depth and draw me in much less. They especially illustrate the cruelty of Chloe. I find I like the concept, but it is poorly done. Stories of bi-sexual or Lesbian relationships I enjoy, but this just turned me off. Every time I went to another page I found something else to disgust me. At the very first, the way Amanda kowtows to her youngert sister is sickening. Her mother, Deborah, didn't allow Amanda to discover her sexuality and her own proclivities, she used her authority as the mother, in her 'obey me' voice to practically force her daughter to eat her. She obtained a agreement from her daughter to be her 'pet' while her daughter was in the midst of sexual desire. A place where one doesn't always think straight This story has so many problems that I think I'll quit right here.....

You are one of the better writers and I think Rebecca's sketch art is awesome. I think that she must have a good knowledge of anatomy. Good work.

it may come as a huge surprise to you that i have copied your stories MILF SEDUCTRESS and CATCHING MOMMY on MS Word and illustrated them with Rebecca's illustrations a year back, to give the feel of an illustrated story. was stunned to see that you and she know each other and you actually did a combination. you both are geniuses in your respective fields. love this combination. ask her to illustrate all your stories. it has the most mind blowing effect. Both the stories were and are still the best. as i follow you on twitter i am aware of all your stories. you still have not been able to beat these two stories in matter of erotica and arousal. i feel you both should join hands to do an exclusive graphic novel with the balloon writing done by you and illustrations by Rebecca. this could be the best sellout in the history of graphic novels~ @ ravieravan4

Hi

To the last commenter,

Good point. I'll have to go and check my upcoming illustrated story as I am sure I do that in that story too....

That said, such trivial errors really shouldn't impact your enjoyment of the story that much.

This is erotica, not Shakespeare.

It is free and no one, the editors or myself are getting paid.

Jasmine 2015

That all said, a good point.

Why do some stories fail to get the conversational portions properly executed? If one is speaking and is being quoted there are correct ways and then there are incorrect ways. This story had far too many which were the latter rather than the former. I will give a generic example to make it more obvious.

A person speaking about their own self would likely say, "Eat mommy's pussy." That works as thw person speaking is mommy and ahe wants the person to eat her pussy. It makes no sense for mommy to say, "Eat your mommy's pussy." The mommy and the eater know the pussy is that of their mom, so why would the your need to be included? Who speaks in such a manner? No one apart from bad actresses in low budget porn. I am not speaking of the quotes from someone else speaking about mommy to their daughter, because using your in that context would fit.

I have noticed when comments are left by fans of a writer a great deal gets overlooked in the story. Ratings are more generous and anyone giving honest feedback is called, "hater" or "jealous" by said fans. This is not the ass kissing section, and most writers are more than capable of sticking up for their own work and choices in dialogue. I'd rather read a reply from the writer than one from someone incapable of distinguishing the difference between constructive criticism and trolling.

I happen to be a fan of some stories written by this writer, so I know I will enjoy future stories also. I look forward to reading more. The illustrations were well done, and the choices fit with the written scenes very well. That must have been a huge undertaking!

Loved it getting wanked and sucked reading about cunt lapping cunts, then fucking and sucking my two girlfriend half to death. Totally drunk on cunt juice, fucking wonderful, need at least two days to recover. I absolutely adore cunt, eating cunt tongue fucking cunt and drinking cunt nectar, doing all these things while up to my balls in cunt. Your partner must spend all his spare time totally blissed out and fucked up.

Great story with perfect artwork. Loved the shifting power and storyline. I plan on reading some of your other stuff.

I am a big fan of yours and you never disappoint. This story had me hooked. My panties are still wet!!! Great great job.

Lovely Story Dear Jasmine!

Congrats for yours lovely # 200 Stories and specially for this one about Lesbian Incest and for the Grandma participation mmmmmm

Lesbian Incest is the Best!

I love the fact you add the Grandmother into this loving story!

We do not see it often here in Literotica.

Would love to see more stories with Older Ladies in Lingerie in a very close family love relationship, like Grandmothers, Mothers-in-law and Aunties mmmmm

And maybe, if you want, make the Older Women the Dominant role and character mmmmmmm

This Story needs a Sequel! And a more participation for the Grandmother, Aunties and maybe, the Mothers-in-law mmmmm

I´m a 54yo mature Lesbian Aunt in a very close love relantionship with my own Aunt since my teens, and I can assure you all that my loving Aunt, at 76yo still is a Great loving Lover! mmmmmm

Thank you for yours ALL loving Stories and for some Great Wet wet Moments of Big "O" True Pleasures mmmmmmm

Must change my pants now .... they are all Wet!

Aunt Helena

54yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal

This story was so good it took me two weeks to read because the words kept getting messy.....

This is Literotica, not a soap box. The point of erotica is to turn people on, not piss them off.

The best incestuous lesbian story I have ever read! Especially with the magnificent illustrations of Rebecca.

I wish you could develop another delightful story with other specialists lesbian sex artists like Amy Matthews, or the art of Grigio?

This story is the most gross thing ever. I don't understand how people could like this.

A BLONDE IS IN IT.

LOL jk awesome story. Great drawings.

you should do another illustrated story like this a second one

Your stories and Rebecca's artwork perfectly compliment each other. I look forward to many more joint efforts.

Several parts of the written portion of the story were too Hokey! It obviously was not proofread before publication. It was readable, though.

However, the artwork more than made up for those discrepancies in the wording. Many of the drawings looked almost like a professional artist did them. A few of them looked almost like taken from photographs. Most were scaled properly, and matched the verbiage well. Good job all around. 5*s

Absolutely the best story I have ever read on this site and I especially loved the art work provided it really brought the story to life.

Thanks to REBECCA for the excellent art work. Beautifully drawn and well illustrates the story at the point where used. Really adds to the story.

I liked this better than any of your other exciting posts. The illustrations made this story so much more fun to read. I loved it.

While I have enjoyed and praised all of your stories this one is a step above all of your most recent entries. While Rebecca's art certainly helped, this was the first of your stories in a while I just couldn't stop touching myself to. The length is perfect as all of these stories were great and needed to be told, the art was perfectly matched up, and while the number of Mistresses/slaves were huge we saw small intimate interactions. Bravo! I absolutely loved Deborah and my only complaint is that Chloe (whom I loved to hate) became the to Mistress. FIVE STARS!

I give this a three. I'm just really not sure how I feel about this. Cloe is not just a Domme, she is a bitch. Seducing women, not women she wanted, but just because she could. She took another cheerleader's mother by force and the mother had nothing to do with her daughter's actions. It was just a revenge fuck. They make fun of the Father's penis on the small side, when in reality a smaller penis is perfect for anal sex. Much less pressure needed to penetrate, no pain involved, and less chance of tearing delicate anal tissues. With an older woman (his mother, obviously) who might have the beginnings of 'rroids, the less trauma the better and still achieve the pleasure. Deborah's actions precipitated a split with her mother when nothing should be allowed to come between family. Deb was young and would have many pets in her life, Rose had found someone and had the opportunity to live overseas and mix with the edges of the Royal Family and Deb would try to deny her that. Chloe took her mother's secretary just because she could. The woman had several children and a husband and she hadn't gone looking for the relationship. Yes, Chloe is just a mean-hearted person and Deb is too weak a parent to keep her daughter's bitchy machinations in check. Too much manuvering in this story for places in the pecking order. Chloe is clearly the head Domme here, but a good Mistress loves and cares for each of her Subs though she might have to enforce clearly defined rules on occasion. Every Sub needs to know how very loved and cared for she/he is by her Mistress. For their loyalty, she needs to commit to their welfare and protection. Therefore they can submit to her without fear and with total abandonment of self. This could have been extremely erotic, but in the end is not. And Blackmail never has a place anywhere. Anyone who would make use of intimate images for their own Power games has something wrong. Blackmail isn't about the sex, like rape it is always about Power and Hatred.

I have loved your work for a long time. This is hands down my favorite story of your many excellent ones. Rebecca's pictures is like frosting on a tasty cake. Thanks for the excellent story!

Great pictures. I really enjoyed this story. Had me hard and pulled myself off wilst reading it. Yes I spayed cum allover my hands and balls wishing I was there.

More please with plenty of pictures.

Thanks silkstockingslover you write the best of stories.

Mike

I normally like longer stories. Ones that have an actual story. It was just an overly long string of sex scenes. The dialogue was ham-fisted preaching. Limitless lesbian hedonism good and everything else bad. Not even one female out of this bunch had the ovaries to say pussy doesn't do it for me? It goes from fantasy to cartoon, and I don't mean the illustrations. Prime example of less being more, a robust editing would improve it immensely.

My favourite writer and my favourite artist!!!

Enough said.