All Comments on 'Mom's Backseat Boy'

And another carbon copy story that shows up all the time. God damn.

This was a great first story and I hope you continue this series

Good job!!! Nice detail and good flow. Keep writing!

great story - please continue. 5 stars

Good story for a new author.

Looking forward to more

A good start, exploring territory previously researched by Silkstockinglover.

Very good for someone's first story, I hope you continue writing.

A very good debut, Todd. It's not a new idea - mum (or sister) sitting on son's lap during a car journey - but you did a nice job of it. Your style is fine and you will surely write some better and longer tales for our reading pleasure. Bravo!

I liked this story a lot so please continue it. This could continue a long time. thank you

Great start! Looking forward to reading more….

Very hot and saucy

I love backseat stories, so I'm glad you published thus. It's certainly good, would like to see more, especially in abovementioned setting.

Definitely more please, I like where this is going

As Billy gains more confidence and morphs into William I’d really like to see his progression lead to him being more assertive and aggressive with his mother who finds a secret submissive side.

This car crap is inconceivable and just tired, never original and sadly has to get creepy to vary enough not to be cookie cutter dribble.

Keep writing!! Waiting for your next submission!!

So far so good. Please continue

Not bad for a first story. More chapters please

Well written, hope to read the next chapter of this plot

Hey man. Great work! Really good for your first submission. I'm looking forward to what you write next!

Wonderful!

Wow. I loved it so much, I'll even say it backwards. Wow! I gave this 5 stars and a favor point. Looking forward to more. Thanks.

Jolly good fun! Mom's a babe, Billy's hung, the backseat beckons! I disagree that this is a carbon copy of all the other backseat stories. I mean, the elements are the same, but you've certainly pepped all that up for this reader! And now it will continue on, with Pops on the outside and maybe Jenny sussing things out and joining in somehow.

One problem i do have is your lack of proofreading your own story- lots of mistakes. I have yet to publish a story here, so i don't know how it works, but hitting the write a story button and typing away no doubt invites these types of mistakes. Other that that, i love the way you write, building the passion of Madison and Billy 'til they can't help but start up their illicit, incestuous love affair. Thanks for making my morning! Please continue!

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Don’t pay attention to the nay sayers. Everyone has to start somewhere and you did a good job for your first.

And at least you had the courage to post a story where some who complain about carbon copies haven’t even written any yet.

Great job for a first time. Part 2 is going to be great as well I’m sure

Was kinda hoping sister was hiding in the closet.

Can't wait for the next part of this story!

Very hot, can't wait for more

Good start. I'd love to see more chapters.

Very good start. Waiting for #2

That's hot!

For your first effort, it was very well done.

Incredily hot and well written. Great job!

This is a good start, sis needs to eventually join in.

Sounds like maybe she had Billy with a man other than her hubby. Maybe it's time for billy to breed her or her and his sister.

I think that the author is capable of writing a much better car-based story. I would encourage him to focus his energies on this objective. 3/5 ⭐️. See me after class.

Good start so far. Let's see what you can do .

Great start. Billy needs to keep fucking his mom and maybe his sister too. Don't forget to tell us what they look like. (Smiling)

Great first story, looking forward to more! 5/5 Thanks!

Looking forward for more

Such a hott story!! More!

Well written - you've managed to keep a varied pace, with fluctuations between near-frantic and calm-introspection, used excellent descriptive prose and realistic and properly sized internal dialogue combined with a fresh style to make the 'same old backseat plot' interesting. Looking forward to reading more from you. In any genre.

I really like to read what happens next.

The start of what looks to be a very entertaining story.

Great Job! Keep em coming

Got me hard quick nice story

For your first story, this was awesome!! I'm definitely looking forward to chapter 2

Great job for your first one. Looking forward to more, definitely part 2 of this. You can't end it like that and not keep it going. Nobody likes a cliff hanger. Keep up the good work!

thinly veiled rewrite of someone else's work, even some of the dialogue is nearly identical. Dick move.

Good story, good writing. Will there be a sequel with the sister, maybe? Love to see more!

Love this story hope to see more in the future 🙏🙏

Well done great story......waiting for more!!

Good story keep it going, adding the sister would be great.

Great story, very well written, hoping for a sequel.

Jesus, someone should tell this clown this story has already been written a thousand times.

Great story! Please continue with more of the mom and son sex, but please do NOT involve the sister/daughter into the sex….keep it between the mom and son.

Good story, but needs more...keep up the good work

Great Story, wish there was more of a buildup,

This story had been written before but still a good Read.

Please Continue. Keep it between Madison and Billy.

Love the Mom and Son stories

Look forward to more stories from you

Thanks for your time and effort. Very much appreciated,

No matter what story is written there is always a few that can't help being critical, as they think they are the best at everything.

It was a great first story and feel you should continue it.

Great start! Waiting for more...

Looking forward to the next one.

Can't wait

That's a great story. I'll be waiting for the sequel, Todd.

nice!

Hope Mads and Billy blow past the bourgeois guilt and become openly in love

Todd, love your first part of this

Lovedit!

5 Stars

Super hot, hope the sister gets involved but personally hope the dad stays unaware, hidden sex is super hot

5 stars. second part pls

Hot! I need more!

Excellent first effort and a real stroke-worthy piece. Looking forward to your further chapters.

You have a gift for painting word pictures. Thank you for sharing this with us. I look forward to MORE!

I hope you write more especially their summer adventures along with his sister and mom.

I can't believe its your first story, job well done.

AWESOME, Will be looking for more from you

Amazing

Sounds like my boss except it was her and her son having a baby together and they boyfriend never finding out about it or even being suspicious even though her boyfriend is her ex husband brother so it was really interesting to have her tell me everything and just be like wow when she had the baby he looks exactly like his brother/father his supposed father looks like him to including his grandfather / brother dad it’s kinda funny because my boss ex husband wants grandchildren and I have to laugh because he already has a grandson by his ex wife and son and my boss got told he wants some grandchildren to go fishing so she said take the new baby fishing and he has i only think it’s funny grandpa and grandson near each other fishing and nobody else knows

Hello, ToddEverman.

Your first story, huh?

Well.....AWESOME! You did a great job, and I gave you a score of 5 stars for your efforts.

The story concept was good overall, and the situation of having a curvy and pretty mother with her shapely butt nestled daintily in her sons lap while in a car is a major turn on for me to begin with, but then having it lead to penetration and orgasm in subterfuge is even better.

Yes. I wish that I had been the son! How delicious can you get?

The unanticipated coupling later in the sons bedroom was really nice, too, as well as being great fodder for a large continuation of the story.

So, Dad's a dud in bed, and his wife is neglected......and HUNGRY for attention and satisfaction. Both of which lay in ample supply within the arms of her adoring and hormone infested teenaged son, who without question is ready willing and able to offer his loving mother all the pleasure and attention she can ever want, and at the same time, learn the proper way to love and respect a woman as they hump their way along the pretty path of carnal adventure and discovery.

How Jenny will fit into this picture, should prove interesting as well. She's intrigued already about the identity of the mystery visitor to her brothers room. Maybe she'll want to share in his attentions as her hormones are in overdrive also. Like her mother, her nest of pretty flowers needs to be nurtured by a loving hand and body.

Who better than her brother to help out, as their sweet mom guides them both in how to love and pleasure each other.

And dad.......well...,.. he'll continue guzzling beer and bratwurst and pork rinds and gaining weight in front of the TV watching endless stupid sports games like a idiot, and ignoring his family as they cultivate and grow their love for each other, together, without him.

They can just set him up a whole keg of beer, and then take off to the ocean for a week or two, and have the time of their lives, loving and laughing in the sand on the beach, and the sheets on the bed.

Keep going! You are off to a great start here!

Sincerely,

B4PW.

Great Start!

More Please!!!

Good start on an old but popular story line. Looking for your next one.

Fantastic story!!

Great read. Hope there is more :-)

I have fantasized for years about my mother sucking my cock. Thank you for making that fantasy cum alive!

WOW!!! Do more!!!

Love it !!

Loved it! My first story here.

A new twist on an old story line....I hope for a follow up to explore his connection with his sister and mother.

Well done.

More chapters for this story are an absolute must! Soon, please!

Great stuff, more please 10/10 👍👍👍

An excellent story that needs better proof reading. I look forward to seeing more chapters.

Pensacola?

Yep, need another chapter to include the daughter blackmailing the mother to eat her pussy

started laughing at 'massive manhood' and had to stop reading in paragraph1. Seriously, are there ZERO reasons to fuck a guy anymore, unless his cock is the size of the Statue of Liberty? Couldn't possibly be anything else that might make someone want to do it?

You should really work hard and finish this story with another chapter, but use the formula you used to write this story and NOT the one for your second story. I really wonder if two people didn't write these stories with this story being above and beyond your second story.