All Comments on 'Moms Beach Takedown'

Glad to know you are still out there. No rating as I didn't read it. I am still waiting for Chapter 28. Stay safe.

Not very good, I'm not into disrespecting women or them disrespecting each other. The step daughter needs a little punishment herself and maybe even the author.

A cute little story.

Always enjoyable reading your stories, maybe a little rushed but hopefully future chapters will show her feelings fully embarrassed.

This story was based on a story I vaguely remembered in Penthouse forum. The basic theme stuck with me.

I really like this. One of your best! Will there be another chapter? I'd like to see how else the daughter dominates her step-mom. 5 stars

Not what I expected or wanted to read.

I thought it to be okay. IMO If all could have been done without the other two girls it may have been 5 stars. but three on one did not work for me. Maybe a second or even a third chapter to show what stepdaughter can do may change rating.

Good to see you resume LITEROTICA story writing again. Eagerly awaiting the updates on the "Gotta Pay the Piper".

I hope you plan to resume the story soon.

It’s so nice to see you writing again. You have always been one of my favorite authors and I’m hoping this means that you will not only be publishing some new stories but also going back and finish or update some of your older ones.

Your one story i did not like.

Like the others Happy that you are back writing. One of my favorite authors and always enjoy bring entertained by your great storytelling and characters. Would love to see update to some of your current ones. Cheers

Loved this story, I would love to read a sequel.