All Comments on 'Mom's Bed Ch. 05'

Are just a few thinks that come to mind when talking about this fine story. Completely off of the erotic scale, and down right good reading.

I hope to see more soon.

I love D/s in an incest story, even more so when it's Son/mother. I would love to read about what sounds like rhonda's forced sex, humiliation, punishment and ultimate journey into submission at the hands of Megan.

Not just this story, but this whole series....DAMN GREAT Job....

I had to give it 5 stars like all your series. The one that really has me hooked is High School Again? Ugh and I am going nuts waiting on the next chapter so I was just a little bummed to see this one before chapter 6 of that one

i love this whole series do you think you will be making another chapter telling how things go from rhonda moving in and how her sister deals with it please write it soon if you do

Have to agree with the two previous comments, when's the next chapter comming?

You have to give us at least one more chapter, altough I would hate to see the Mom breack with her son and master, a much better ending would be for her to realize she is happy at his feet!

Superbly done. a fiver

This entire story has been a "fiver." Keep up the good work.

story teller (storyteller)

way Megan talking (Megan’s)

Any time (Anytime)

anymore (any more)

we go lay down (lie)

really want too (to)

heart wrenching (heart-wrenching)

could care less (couldn’t)

been (-a) busy

can't be worst (worse)

mother in law (mother-in-law)

my mother legs (mother’s)

did it's best (its)

wasn't really (ready)

love making (lovemaking)

Rhonda hair (Rhonda’s)

lie her head (lay)

Long term (Long-term)

Lol, interesting twists and turns! I just get a kick out of the back of the neck thing, heh.

...I think Megan needs tied to the bed and let everyone in the family have their way with her, hehe, better tie her down ass-up with a pillow or two propping the i portant bits up! Dont forget to video it, lol!

Honestly though, I could do without any confrontation between Megan and them. Why would you send your new girlfriend back over there alone to pack up and move out while dealing with the little nut job?! Rofl.

Thanks again! :)

Awesome story, cant wait for the movie. :-)

Oh, I really like the turn this story takes from this part on. I'm sad that this story is ending "soon" (;-), but I will read this fantastic fantasy again.

Thanks!!!

Great story.