All Comments on 'Mom's Best Friend'

by Pirlouit

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Bi47Bi47over 3 years ago

Oh i I can’t wait for more😍😍😍😍😍😍 magnificent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
That was hot!

This story is hot and I gave it 5 stars.

CZOFTWCZOFTWover 3 years ago
Fantastic start!

I'm hoping you continue this story!

patriot961patriot961over 3 years ago
Part2

Looking forward to part 2

Wfd821Wfd821over 3 years ago
More

Great start

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Interesting premise

Pretty good, but doesn't involve her whole body. Moves along too fast. No 'visuals', descriptions of what her various body parts looked like. All we hear about is a finger up her ass, fingered pussy, and blowjob.

Gave it four stars.

Would read future chapters.

bucco40bucco40over 3 years ago
Very Good!!

Would love to read more. Amy's total submission is what needs to eventually happen.

hunterv18hunterv18over 3 years ago
Great!!!

Please continue with the storyline. There are so many ways you could take the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good start

Nice start. I would like to see more verbal humiliation and Trish being submissive to Tyler.

jrgg43jrgg43over 3 years ago
Please continue

I want to see what direction this heads...

JollyoldchapJollyoldchapover 3 years ago
Kudos

A very enjoyable tale that needs to be further explored.

BunnymasterBunnymasterover 1 year ago

Your writing is above average for plotting, but you really need to proof read and edit.

Especially if you’re an ESL writer.

The story is top notch overall but weak in the editing.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

She shouldn't be deciding anything by the end, only him.

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