All Comments on 'Mom's Biggest Fan Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great Writing

Mom & Daughter lesbian action has 8 to maybe 10 chapters in it before it starts to becomes repetitive, (that is tribbing sex with a double sided dildo, sex in movie theater, sex on hiking trail, sex in clothes changing room, etc...) wit the mom a celebrity actress they probably have at least one paparazzi guerrilla photographer following her around.

To spice things up a little bit more you need to start adding characters who find out about their incestuous relationship and join in on the sexual action. Some ideas could include an estranged brother/uncle who is down on their luck, a peeping/nosy neighbor, a perverted paparazzi, their longtime driver, etc...

roftlheoryroftlheoryover 4 years agoAuthor
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Thanks so much for your ideas!

I have in fact been thinking of what will come next in the series, including some of the ones you've mentionrd. Though to be honest 8-10 chapters might just be enough to finish this series altogether :P

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