by MacSwain612
Great style. This story developed very nicely and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Please don't just rush to the sex scenes because sexual tension is what makes a story erotic.
Personally, on his return home I'd have her regret what they did and have her state: 'It's against the law'. His frustration grows and one night he buys a couple of bottles of wine. I'm sure you know how to take it from there.
Thanks for sharing your imagination.
This is reminiscent of some of the earlier work. Would really love to see you build on this. Welcome back.
Such beautiful words when a mother admits she orgasmed from nursing. After we started making love my mother admitted it to me.
I loved this one! I sincerely hope there is a sequel! Very erotic.
The first part about the older GF could have been left out, but the mother part was awesome
Enjoyed the telling of this story more than others in the past. Right up there in my top 5 favorites. Touching, gentle, shy, feelings, passion, revelations and more words to describe the open and raw emotions portrayed. Really nice. Great work.
My mom better be wearing a see through nighty and nothing else. Then there'd be some serious fucking going on.