All Comments on 'Mom's Buttons'

Brilliant right up to the very end ! She wasn't wearing a bra in the first place ???

Keep up the good work 10/10

I didn't mind it at all. Yes there were some spelling and grammar issues but you owned them. Find somebody else to proof read your work as you are to close to it and will miss things. A example is right at the end where you say that she put her bra back on. Several times you had said previously that she wasn't wearing a bra and was regretting it.

Other than though keep up the good work. I'd like to see a continuation but don't bring the dad into it.

You wrote a few times that mom was not wearing a bra. Then in the second last sentence, mom is ... slipping her bra back on.

Next exam will be hotter!

A good story line but maybe stretches the credibility a little too far (also maybe 40% longer than it needed to be)? I like to "believe" in the plausibility, but find this one to be a struggle.

Ooh, so close...! Right at the very end, you had Mom slipping her bra back on. What bra? Your emphasized during her nervous strip that she hadn't been wearing one!

She slipped her bra back on in the end but she wasn’t wearing any when she did her strip tease. Great story but that end was a jarring error. Better luck in the future.

great story

however at the end you said she slipped her bra back and earlier in the story she wore no bra

otherwise it was hot and flawless

Masterfully crafted with each math problem, button, touch and thrust more erotic than the last. Wonderfully written totally making the reader feel as if the were the mother.

This was a great story with the minor typo and a slip up at the end. The braless mother wanted to put her bra back on before her hubby got home. Excuse me but if you did not have a bra how could you put one back on? I would love to meet this mom and show her what a tongue could do. If not for those minor errors I would have given this story a 5 plus. Great work.

As far as more You better believe it. You are a goodie. I have been hard all through this.

FUCKING HOT!!! Yes another chapter would be amazing! Great story!

Great story! Can't wait to read more!!

Mommy and maybe sister needs to get pregnant by him. Or dad should fuck sister 9yRGN

I only wish that my mother would have taken seriously my grades as this mom did. I believe she could have made a difference in some of my grades and I would have loved to plant my seed in her deeply. I also would love to have fucked her doggy. You see, every time i masturbated I fantasized about doing her doggy and reaching around to squeeze her tits. I loved this story and gave it a 5 star.

Please tell me there will be more of these two.

Got me so hard, can’t wait for the next chapter

The sister DOES need to find out ! ! !

I think you should continue it with mom really getting into it and some of his friends get in on the action.

Yes yes yes. Awesome story.

Love this story. Would love to see a second part. Maybe involve the sister. Or he takes both mother and sister at the same time

I loved this new twist on a familiar theme. I gave it five stars and a favorite point. And I won't mention the error at the end re the bra as 90% of the other comments already did. lol

Great story line and build up to climax.. Would enjoy a follow up couple of chapters... Got 5 stars and a Favored score along with Favored Author.... Carry - on.....

I came so hard to this

A pleasure to read. With the changing times we're living in today this kind of coupling will become more and more common. An interesting subject, full of erotic possibilities. Please continue with it.

You should not let the sister find out and stick with mother and son.Its better resulting in blossoming romance between mother and son and impregnation.

Please make part 2 with Mother and her own Son getting it on and I won't to read that.

awesome keep writing more

where did she get the bra at the end if she wasn't wearing one that day?

wow very very good

Please continue

Definitely loved it especially since it was from her point of view! I definitely think there needs to be a continuation of the story. I honestly believe the sister doesn't need to be involved. It is just incredibly hot the way it is.....Think it should continue into the summer time as well as into college with consequences like she getting pregnant.

A full send.

More chapters for sure!

That was a great read but I know it’s fiction! The first time my son was with me, he cane so fast in my mouth only after 3-4 sucks!:-). Thank goodness for his youth because he was back ready and able in less than 10 minutes!

"I loved my husband dearly, but he certainly wasn't anything to write home about in the bedroom."

5 Stars

Loved it!

Definitely more chapters, I’d like the sister to get involved, maybe have her catch them. Great story overall, nothing negative to really say

Very good continue......you ended with her slipping her bra on and when she was stripping you had it where she wasnt wearing a bra just a blouse and sweater......

...more chapters to come!

Great story. Definitely more chapters. Would like to read a story about a son catching mom fucking his friend or enemy

Loved this, nice slow build up, the strip scene one of the best I've read. Loved that she went for the more erotic and revealing option of taking her panties off before her blouse, how many women would take that option. So hot especially in this context.

Love to read more, just Mom and Anthony, at first but maybe sister can get involved, possibly blackmailed into joining in???

Gave 5 stars ignoring the bra error that so many have pointed out.

Tagged as fav story and author.

More details about her ass. Does it jiggle?

Well told. Storytelling good enough to ignore any wrong bits.

Wish I had that type of incentive whilst studying, would have gained PhD by age of 20. Can just imagine my female of choice stripping down in the exam rooms. Especially the major exams with hundreds in the pavillion. Up to three hours of titilating questions.

Oh, gotta have more. Don't forget his poor sister. Suggest dad needs to be sent off somewhere for months of work.

Keep in mind that no matter what you do, someone won't like it. For example, someone posted "More ass", which easily could (and probably would) lead to anal, but know if you do someone else would post you ruined it with the anal garbage.

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Another posted "Only mom and son". Me, I wouldn't mind adding the husband into the mix. For me, the "stud son and so-so smaller father" is an overused cliche -- as is the pregnancy that person likes. Me, I wouldn't mind a story where you combine the two examples, that this breaks him out of his vanilla style and he and Anthony DP her. (Of course, I can see someone calling the DP I mention a cliche)

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My one real issue is -- boy does Anthony have stamina. I mean he's had a hardon all along, yet he lasts through her blowing him and then them fucking for what seems to be a relatively long time. At his age, I would have expected him to cum soon after she takes him into her mouth, but, again, at his age by the time he goes down on her he's erect again.

...the best there is! ;)

Nicely done, CMK.

Very near the end you story goes, "I turned back to Anthony, giving him another glimpse of my perky tits before slipping my bra back on." However, earlier in the story it states that under the sweater and blouse the mother is not wearing a bra. Such an inconsistency spoils what could have been a very good ending

This was well written for the most part and I enjoyed reading it. I could make some criticism but it would be small, like don't end a sentence with a preposition (unless it's in the dialogue). This was HOT! Thank you!

Get hubby and daughter in to play please!!

Great story . Rated 5 star.

Love stories about a Mom laying her body out as a motivator for a teenage son. fast and to the point. Very erotic. Fine writing too. 5 stars.

Yes, please do a sequel. I would love to read it. Thanks.

Loved it. Please do a sequel

Loved it. Please do a sequel !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This deserves a sequel. Wow, this is hot.

I see you updated this, to change bra to blouse. However, considering the title, this may have been a better edit.

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I turned back to Anthony, giving him another glimpse of my perky tits before rebuttoning my blouse.

PART 2 PLEASE!!!

as a mom I think that you had already been wanting it and found a great excuse to make it happen! I can say that because that's how I ended up with my sons cock exploding in me!:)

veryyy hot n erotic story.. too good writing..

more chapters plsssss... slowly sensually add daughter n husband

thanks lottttt !!

Button Button, There's Goes a Button.

Excellent story. Wish I had that kind of encouragement while in school. Worth MORE than 5 stars and of course is now in my Favorites.

This story is a tour de force. I LOVED it!

Gave you a 5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥) 👍👍!

Great job..very well written.. definitely 5🌟..

Yeah, that was a great story! Nice build up......nice finish!

This was the first story I read in which the slang "destroying the pussy" was used. I know how it's meant, but still, the wording betrays your mindset or your lack of, well, awareness, sensibility, decency . I will stop reading any story as soon as a pussy gets "destroyed" in it. With that I leave you pussy destroyers to yourself.

A very hot story, but I have to agree with that "Anonymous" person. Destroying a pussy is a sort of sick male thing. Sorry but pussy is to be loved, petted, licked, sucked and cherished, NOT destroyed. Story was a five, but if that wonderful thing had been loved a little more it would have been a six or seven...:-)

Just totally awesome. And the lead is was almost believable.

Overall it was a good story. Yes, some follow-up stories with them having sex would be wonderful.

5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥) ,👍👍!

LOVED this atory.

LOVED this story!

Well, it was hot, gotta admit that. And it's a fantasy, of course, so you gotta suspend a lot of disbelief. Interesting, though, when you think about who this is "for", and who the readers identify with. It seems like the mom is the main character, and you could identify with her. Seems like most readers identify with the son, which shows where their heads are at. But me, I identify with the dad. In my fantasy, he shows up and pulls the kid out of his wife right before her first orgasm, kicks both their asses and throws them out naked and bleeding, then has them prosecuted for insest and ruins them as best he can. Then goes and gets an actual loving wife. He'd have a lot of learning and work to do, but that would be a good start.

I loved the story through the motivational part. However, it lost its 5 star rating and my interest when it got physical. Don’t get me wrong. I enjoy fantasies involving family members, but the animalistic nature of the second half of the story did not match the motherly intent of the first part. Maybe a mutual exploration/masturbation scenario would have been more realistic. But I still gave it 4 stars just for the buildup.

Way too long. I could not finish it. Too boring and drawn out. Get to the topic and keep it short.

Unnecessary criticism of some things, I think. A young man his age could get it up again quickly, especially considering who it is he has his dick in and how horny she is. Also, when a woman gets real hot she can be more aggressive and sexually demanding than a man.

Well some women are way aggressive even more so the most men when comes to sex so that part is realistic a young man getting it up pretty fast after cumming also realistic the motivation on moms part showed she cares for and loves her son that she would do anything for him however just cause it was realistic the way you wrote the story in the end just didn't seem to match the love the mom had for son at the start you went off the focus too me you should have made the sex more loving between the 2 since that's the way it started to begin with

I liked the story even if the impetuses for the incest was a little corny. Thought it disrespectful of Anthony for the language he used in front of his mother seeing that she didn't usually cuss. Taking off her panties before her blouse also seemed a little strange as most women will usually bare their breast before their pussy. Whatever, she still got naked. With that said, I can't believe that Anthony was able to focus on his math problems at all with all the blood going to his huge dick. The author never said that Anthony was a virgin, but I'm betting a healthy 18 year old guy getting to fuck his mother, wouldn't be able to hold off climaxing with her like she asked; especially after bringing him so close to climax with a blow job. Better to let him cum, get him hard again and then go for the longer fuck. I'll still give it four stars just because it's mother/son incest, but that's being generous.

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Fantastic!