All Comments on 'Mom's College Visit'

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KamattlockKamattlockabout 14 years ago
Ok

The story was good until the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Four Stars..

...but yeah, kinda weak at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Sorry

But she is just a middle aged slut now, no love or feelings here. Yuck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Good story...

But, some people aren't going to like the end where Jenny has sex with Nate.

sexmatesexmateabout 14 years ago
Story was good but...........

Needed more details to make it great and the ending was to rushed!

Thanks for writing!

kathy2b46kathy2b46about 14 years ago
wonderful

i loved it so hot taking her son and getting more .

it could be true was it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
You fucking Rock!

I love this story! It's almost as good as the amnesia of Beth's father series!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please write more of the story, its great!

Great story, please write more, as its hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Liked it up until ...

it turned into a group sex story. It just had too many elements going on all at once. Mom ends up in bed with her son, that seems like an extreme transition all on its own. Then suddenly, she's part of a foursome that includes her son. Too much, too soon.

The writing was good though, good descriptive passages.

chargergirlchargergirlabout 14 years ago
Great story, seth!

And as always, off the charts on the hotness scale. xo

Plainly_JanePlainly_Janeabout 14 years ago
Seth Man

You did a good job, especially the first half of the story. I liked the way you quickly set up the Mom character - frustrated wife, husband too busy for sex or to go have fun with her, and then she's off for a week-end. The cop pulling her over and giving her something to fantasize about later was also really good and felt natural. I really liked the description of when she wakes up in the night to find she's having sex, that it's not just a hot dream. Very vivid depiction!

I won't touch the final bit of the story, since that's not my thing and it wouldn't be fair to give my opinion.

You have a really good writing style for this genre - you cut to the chase fairly quickly but yet you still give the reader a good basic mental picture of the main players. I think that's important ;) Nicely done.

KonyhaKonyhaabout 14 years ago
Mmmm..luscious

I have missed your stories. You are the Master of erotic short story telling. I don't mind more than one partner however for some reason in an incest story I like those who join in to be family members. Either way your stories keep me at the computer and squirming in my seat.

osufan3578osufan3578over 12 years ago

What a fantastic story. Another true example of a woman acting out on her true feelings. It's unfortunate that such feelings are not accepted in culture today. I'm sure there are plenty of people out there who have these desires and urges. I enjoyed this very much!

Thank you.

homerjayhomerjayover 11 years ago
mom son friend

the best combination

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
fuck

I loved it until the son's friend started fucking his mom at the end.. thats some bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
yes

a very good mother

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fucking hot !!

O my I love this story !!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hmmmmm

A great Love story OK a great SEX story

RON TEXAS cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
sequil

How about a follow up story this one was so good.

Ron

cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
could have been better

it was good but the sharing brought it down a couple of points. She was there to spend time with her son, not to spend time with her son and the whole world.. For me, it could have been better if she had kept it just the two of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I can relate

I dropped my son off at college and met a dreamy stud in a fast food restaurant before I got on the road home. I spent the next 4 hours fucking him and his roommate in every way. We never exchanged last names. I got away with it and enjoyed doing things to them and having things done to me that my husband won't even consider. I guess I'm a slut mom. Oh well...

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8over 7 years ago
From a loving mum to a fucking slut..

A good ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ storyline at the start ....BUT unfortunately you killed this story for me with your ending. From a loving mum who didn't want to share her son to fucking slut and so much for the sons love for his mother as well. Sorry a lucky ⭐⭐⭐....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
wow

mom is a scum of the earth slut. you couldn't pay me to fuck that whore. sickening

CrazyNewAdventurerCrazyNewAdventurerabout 7 years ago
This was...

Well... I can't understand but it seems not many are fans of MILFs and don't know how to shut up if they can't say anything nice at all. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Lost me

when she let nate fuck her. she's a scum of the earth whore...1star

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
For Bill's sake

We all hope she either never goes home or hits a snowplow on the way.

One sick self centered bitch and I hope Dad pulls all the financial support from the kid too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Funny story!

I liked the story; it's incest- what do you expect? Son and friends share her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
REALLY LIKE IT! PORNOGRAPHIC. FOR THIS STORY I GAVE YOU A 5- (4.6/5 = 92%)!

I LOVE MOM-SON INCEST STORIES.

:-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
nice tale

liked your tale, I did not have a mother that I wanted to have sex with.

waste is like garbage but it sounds like the word you wanted

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great Story More of this

Liked this story a lot both jenny and dans character are good please write more of dan and jennys adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
MEH!

just another fuck story 2 stars...

Been_That_Done_ThereBeen_That_Done_Thereover 1 year ago

You should've at least noted this is a slightly alternative take on a two or three-decade old story.

MfkndragonMfkndragon10 months ago

You ruined a other wise good story them being in the same room is all good but the moment the other guy fucked her killed the mood for me and I'm probably not the only one but I know some will like it

MfkndragonMfkndragon10 months ago

You took a incest story and made it to well honestly I don't know what lol that is the reason it killed the mood i thought I was reading a incest story at aleast according to the category but this basically turned out to be a cuckold story of sorts we all know it ends with them leaving Dan completely out of the sex for now on if I was Dan I would kick both the dude and Tammy out on there asses and have nothing else to say to his mother ever she started out being a mom before she decided to betray her son and turn into a bitch of a mother and there is a difference between a mom and mother

JobewonJobewon6 months ago

Should have left Nate and Tammy out of it.

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