All Comments on 'Mom's Dating App Debachle'
by Skiesgrey87
- 28 Comments
onlyfiction7 months agoGreat setup! Reminds me vaguely of https://narratophile.com/story/havinitlarge-tinder-match but much faster. There was a tiny inconsistency re. mom's underwear being between them when she straddled son, but then - four paragraphs later - she says she'd taken them off much earlier. No biggie, but it threw me our of the story for a sec. 5-stars. I hope there's much more in the future.
walkindatdog7 months agoi'd love to know more about Trish and Ry, cuz there's definitely a chemistry there that just can't be denied! Surely they will continue on as lovers, cuz Mom's already addicted to her son's big Johnson and he sure won't have any problem tappin' dat buxom body again and again! More importantly, he was indeed raised to love her and love conquers all.
Thanks for writing! Please proofread your stories before submitting in the future cuz their were a few mistakes, even misspelling the title: it's 'debacle'! Lose the 'h'! Still and all, it had me swooning for the two of them. Thanks!
Anonymous7 months agothe epilogue should have been her looking down at her big belly while talking to her friend!
rjb4268747 months agoYOU HAVE TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER BECAUSE LEFT US HANGING.
Please tell us what happened the next morning.
Anonymous7 months agoGood start. More direct talks. Plenty more to happen before the final chapter. Start writing
Burning_Heretic7 months agoWell written story. Thank you for posting it. I hope this isn't the only story you post here.
Anonymous7 months agoNice story, now we need a part 2, the morning, they are both sober, they realize that they are falling in love with each other, Ryan will make love to his mom and cum inside of her fertile pussy to seal their love forever with a baby in her tummy, 4 stars, waiting for part 2.
Anonymous7 months agogood story. Hope a chapter 2 will be added soon. Maybe Ryan gets his mom and her friend from work Sarah pregnant. Cant wait to seer what will happen next
OI8U27 months agoExcellent story, you need to continue. 5 Stars. You have set the perfect stage for a mother and son fuck fest! Please give more detail of what Ryan, and mostly Trish, look like. (Grin) I love areolas, nipples, and tits of course, but they don't have to be huge. Trish at 44, should have a nice bush, just like my mom. Shaven for a bikini, (obviously not a tiny one) but still having a nice pubic triangle. It turns me on.
Anonymous7 months agoLoved the build up and feelings of a mother and son crossing the taboo of incest together, no regrets, no guilt, just passion between a mother and son. I want my sexy Aunt to read this too! Thanks
PhoenixLore19816 months agoOk the movie decrepition sounded alot like Friday the 13th which was not a cheesy horror movie nor did it suck it was a original slasher horror film that was a really good movie actually all of the originals were good though not as good as the first one if that's the movie your talking about it is clear that you are 1 of those that don't like the movie for the movie it self but for the affects which tells me you have no idea what a good movie is Friday the 13th is a classic and while not scary to a adult it's still a hell of lot more scary than any modern day horror film
Anonymous5 months agoIt was pretty good up until the point he randomly pulled out and came on her stomach. What the fuck? How is that sexy or intimate? What a waste. Cum belongs inside a pussy especially the first time. So many idiot writers fail to grasp this, especially for erotic stories. So disappointing.
Anonymous5 months agoLoved it but it's like a lot of stories on here one sex and done, you need to continue and see what this leads to 5 stars
Anonymous5 months agoVery nice story but they only had sex once you need to continue and let them have lots of sex and mom gets pregnant 5 stars
