All Comments on 'Mom's Deep Love Pt. 02 Ch. 08'

Can’t wait for the next chapter. 5 stars. Brilliant.

I hope you keep writiinf additional chapters. Sexy read.

WHERE IS CHAPTER OF PT-1 CHAPTER 8

just great sex. can't wait for the next chapter. but - like anonymous below - is there a part 1? if so, could you post it here?

thanks. and 5 stars

Thank you all so much for the great comments on my work. You make me one happy gal. The first part of the work is the first seven chapters. Since there was a time change in the story line, I had to break it into two parts

Great job keeping it creative and sexy, and it is actually easy to follow who all the characters are, when you have so many of them. Fantastic job can't wait to read more

Again you need to watch the names. Sabrina is Denise's mother not grandma yet, when you was trying to describe all the current relations that is what you said. I knew what you meant but some might not have caught that. Everything is great and it's a great 'family love' story, you just need to make sure you keep the names and relations straight when dealing with so many characters.

The story is still very good; however, it is becoming overly complicated. I am actually sitting here with pen and pad attempting to determine the lineage. Each chapter, to include part 1 as a chapter has been rated 5 stars.

Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

Got confused at first because I remember Denise as the Victoria Secret 'valet' of Sabrina's. Also, Stacey, not Sabrina is the wife of Lydia, You even mention Sabrina as her (Nancy's) mom and grandma in the same paragraph. An opening line "nineteen years later' woulda helped. Foxterot7a has a good idea- make a score card. Good story, once I understood- sooo hot 5x

Anon56

Loving this story but you skipped to far ahead it went from Stacey pregnant along with Lydia, Sabrina and Dania also and no info on the babies each had and then you went from them babies grown with their own children it got a little mixed up for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Still 5 stars