by angelmom37
people who try to write would make at least a minimal effort to use the right words!!
Example - "Join the cue,"
My assumption is that they are not intending to make a 'Pool Stick' longer, so the word you probably meant is 'queue'!!
Many others?
I didn't bother wasting time reading.
really - your complaint is "cue" vs "queue"? i really enjoy reading this series. i hope it continues. 5 stars. very sexy stuff.
I have just finished all the chapters posted and rated them ALL 5 stars. Please continue with this great family story. Denice still has one hole to be filled.
I could see this continuing so many possible combinations and maybe add a couple of 'outsiders' just to keep the gene pool varied enough that it doesn't get to fantastical. Wouldn't have minded seeing the store helpers mentioned in part one have a bigger role as well. Could even add another of Cody's offspring to be found and brought into the fold.
Great story about a truly loving and caring family that spans 4 generations in the same house. The shared passion, intimacy, respect for and from each family member truly astounding. This is probably the best generational incest story I have read.
Pffft. There he goes again about respect... Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
This was the best story I have read so far gave it a 5 would have given it a 1o any time would like you to continue with more along this story line, although it's been a while!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very good story found it a little hard to keep track of who was who! There was a lot of love showed for each other I gave it a 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was a very nice story it got a little messed up in my head still gave it 5 stars