All Comments on 'Mom's Game of Dares'

Can't wait to read the next part. Well written and perfectly paced.

WOW that was a realy hot story. great pace not to slow or fast would love to read a sequel to this one great job

Very well done. Nice pace. Nothing seemed rushed or out of character. Keep up the nice work.

None of these stories are true and putting it in the beginning tells you what crap is coming

Mom's game of dares was a GREAT story. Teasing, erotic and just down right sexy. Excellent story!

I was hoping that Carmen and Donna would get to consummate their lesbian love for each other. I just hope that they don't swap sons. It would be better if they only fuck their own sons, and then have hot lesbian cum licking sex after. I know if it was me, I wouldn't want any other guy fucking my mom. Another woman however, is a different story....

OMG, that was hot! And I loved to novel concept of the story! The ending also open ups some interesting ideas for some continuation.

Absolutely loved it. Wish I had had a mom like Carmen. The DARE game was fabulous. The thought of the mom-son pairs meeting is so exciting. Thanks for this story.

Awesome...Please Please a follow up story of the visit.

Outstanding story, looking forward to reading a part 2................():\

I’ve read and re-read it... I can’t stop cumming. 5 times thru the tale, and I’ve shot, and licked up more cum that my entire teen years combined. Will we get to see them get together?

One of the best stories I have ever read here. An entire new setup for me. Really great, not enough stars.

The was absolutely fan-frigging-tastic. The aren't enough stars for this one..........

One of the best I've read. 10/5 stars easy

Do you have any idea how difficulty it is to read all CAPS?? No matter how good the underlying story is, why do I have to work so hard to read it?

I DARE YOU...

...two hot, ripe, MILF moms to allow your horny, eager, young sons to unload their balls into both of your unprotected pussies again (when you’re ovulating) over and over again—let the kinky Mom+son DNA mixing begin!

I'm sorry I can only give this 5 stars! As someone who's a big fan of mom-son fiction, this is exceptional. TYVM!

I dare carmen to spend the night with me. I promise to make her feel loved and happy

What an incredibly erotic story! Not only did you explore a new territory of mother son lust, you did it slowly....surely....sensually....seductively. This is definitely one of my most favorite literotica tales of all time! I choose to believe the words you based it on were a true memory of a naughty mom, but then....I am the eternal optimist! I'll have to see if you've written other works here - I certainly hope so! Thank you for sharing....this is a work of art!

My kind of story. You didn't just go into the sex, which is boring in its own way and often finds me clicking to another story. Your plot and the progression was very well done and was an entirely possible series of events. That was part of the enjoyment of the read.

Yeah, it does need to continue to the visit.

let's get the five stars out of the way. You deserved every one of them. This is the kind of story I often search for here on Lit but rarely find. It'\s not always about the sex, but how well plot-driven a story is. The sex was great, though, as is your writing style.

waiting for next chapter

SO SCHORCHING HOT!

THIS WAS ONE FUCKING HOT FANTASY STORY. I LOVED IT! THANK YOU

Very helpful description of the technical education of older women and the imaginative utilization of a webcam. Mebbe you should write a follow up, Webcam for Dummies or mebbe even better, Webcam for Mommies.

Why can’t just one story end with the moms getting what they truly love just from their son but no they have to bring another into the setting. Do people really think Donna and Carmen will only eat each other after fucking in the same room with out fucking the others son??? It no longer a true loving mom and son relationship it just opens the game up for the sons to fuck other girls as they no longer feel the true love for only their moms!!!!

Love the story was wet from second paragraph on,could see myself wanting to do the same with a daughter.

Keep writing as story was great

Cant wait for the next part to this story

Very inventive, arousing, lewd, just what you want in a lit story!

Except for a few typos here and there, and for saying they could hear each other after saying they couldn't, this is what all writers should aspire to be! Fan-fucking-tastic!!!

I would love to read more please write the next bit . When they all get together .

A truly great story, especially the way it was told.

This has been the hottest story I've read so far

wow that was the hotest story I have ever red on literocia ,hope 4 a seacqual

That was so hot!!!!!! Another Great one. Thank you

Great story,,makes one wonder how much this really happens,,,accidently or intentially,,,just gets one thinking...

What I liked MOST about this story is it was told by the two moms. Talk about HOT. On a scale of 1 to 10, this rates a 33!

This was a wonderful present to read waiting for Santa to ... Oh hell, I'm Santa and so hot ... And ready to deliver My Present to my bride. I often wondered how many moms ever really approached their big boys. Glad I could read about these two Daring Moms. And their energetic sons.

I dare you to let your son plant an incest baby in your motherly womb!

Now that is a loving MOM. WOW

An incredible story of two beautiful and sensual moms patiently, very patiently, emerging from their lives of unfilled sexual need to tease and lure their two sons into a hugely fulfilling, fantasy fuck while staying online with their cross-county partner whose messaging encourage the other to go further and further until they were able to fulfill each other with their sons. I could not get over how much restraint the two moms exercised, over a period of several month, in bringing both themselves and their sons to the point where joint and mutual sexual satisfaction was possible.

Encore! Encore! Bring them together in one place and let us see what they are capable of, after each of the boys has learned how to love their mothers at home. Thank you.

I know of a woman who did something close to this with her son.

It started with sexy email. then webcamming. she did him on webcam

while chatting with me.

an amazingly well crafted story with some kinky twists and turns. please say you are in the process of writing part two

Really good story, believable, with great characters!

Sitting here rock hard! Looking forward to the sequel!

ME: STROKEING HERE. How bout you?

I loved loved loved it! Totally horny!

Can't wait for the sequel,maybe the boys explore each other

games of dares 2 please , thanks

part one wonderfulll !!! part 2 please

It's been 5 years since this hot story was written. Any chance of following up with a second part? All your readers would love to see what happens when the two naughty moms and their sons get together.

Loved the lead-in eroticism, but tend to agree with shysquirter, that the game could have been more slowly developed, with hesitance from the son's and shyness from the mom's. The struggle of overcoming shyness and inhibitions could have made the story more erotically captivating. But overall...good job!

I DARE YA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! .........It was a great read as always, Thanks...LAROC OF AGES

have you ever heard of a mic, leaves your hands free.

Felt the game was a bit rushed. Loved it up until that point

Plus a couple of other things blowing.

That was a underpant ripper.

5*

Some writers and readers. 1 star !!!!!!!

This was great. I agree with one of the readers though, the ending could have been better. Not that it hadn't gotten me off, it did. I was just hoping their first time with their sons would be more intimate and that they'd share their experiences with each other after doing the deed. THEN do the whole webcam dare game. Nevertheless! I haven't checked yet, but I hope there's a sequel to this! Thank you! :)

without cumming in my hand.

your writting just get better and better, it like a daniele steel love novel without all the blips.. keep up the great storys.

mel (a man)

You talked about a sequel and this was written in 2008 it is now 2012 ! we, your faithful readers want more please.

I know it's been a long time since you wrote this and you continue to write very arousing stories as I type.

This story could get so hot if they meet somewhere and carry out the remaining plan. Possibilities once they all say meet in a motel room somewhere are limitless. Move in together as a family is possible.

As usual in my comments to you, not sure if you are into it, but I also love adding male bisexual activity into this.

You definitely need to write a follow up to this hot story. It's very similar in content to the submissions of 'Glenda' on 'Actualincest.Com' with her 'Mommy Swapping' ads. Fucking red hot!!

Such an erotic, lustful, yet essentially human and fun story of Mom/Son. Very well told and anybody could see and feel the passion and the glory. Wonderful effort. Please don't stop.

Simply awesome.

Naughty mommies...Who'd a thunk it? God bless the cyber age...Even an old canard like truth or dare can be updated...Nicely done, and hot as all hell! Hope you continue the tale...

Please Continue with more of this GREAT story!

Excellent Story well Narrated, Pace of the Progress hightened the readers (My ) expectation.

Now, can we have the Sequel: when the Two couples Meet.

and later when the two boys bring along two Girls/ Women.

Ranji from Sri Lanka.

fantastic story. left wanting more. very adictive story. home we see a story of the upcomming vist.

I am totally spent. Five stars, favorite stories, favorite author! Don't know what else to say, so I'll go back and read it again. Thanks for sharing.

max52

WOW!! Fantastic story, I really hope you post part 2 very soon.

I would love to read about them joining the mile high club on the way over. Also would love to read about the two sons getting kinky in front of there moms.

Loved it 5 stars..

This was SO FREAKIN' HOT!!!!! What a great idea for a story. And well exectued!!!

Keep this going!. Please.

Me and the wife loved it!

Ahab,

You have done another great job of writing. I hope you post it on LTD.

Regards,

Joep

This may be one of your best stories and unlike most of the others I want to see part 2 on this Mom and John can go to california and have a naughty family orgy. Well done indeed the mistakes I noticed were quickly forgotten in the red hot teasing and or sex play.

This sorry got me off great

I have never come so hard or for so long as I did reading this tonight.

I could see both women vividly and even smell there excitement, so weel was it described.

If you aren't a serious author, you should be

Thank you so much

holy shit best story ever i wanna read more

This was written almost 3 years ago. Was there ever a sequel?

I'll be waiting to read the next chapter. Thanks. Tom

can anybody tell the best story in this category

What an amazing story. I have never been this hard or came this much reading a story or chatting.

Thank you

I don't think I've ever cum this hard just to a story.... Amazingly written good job!!!!!

THis story had me cuming way too quickly!!

OMG my pussy is driping wet!

Ohhh my tight pussys wet now I want a john in me but my pink didlos going to have to do I'm on the vergebof a orgasm ( 5 minutes please )

Yes that was awsome thanks xx

I loved this story! It was one of the best I've read on the site here and I just loved it. I cant believe I have never come accross your stories before (or maybe I have, i didnt look real close at your list yet). But i loved the build up...my favorite way to do a story. The jump in types usually are lame. Keep up the good work!

I loved your story! It was very hot! I would love to read about all of them getting together! I would especially love parts about the moms together! Please continue this story! Another chapter would be great! Keep up the great work!

Great concept, pulled of very nicely, and left me wanting more! What could be better for a writer?

wow really sexy storie, some titfuck would be great

Outstanding!

not your normal style but you did very well with it. Can we see a part 2 and 3 PLEASE.

I love the anticipation and tease. Thank you!

That was the HOTTTest motherfucking story I have ever read! I really want to read the next installment! WOW.

There are hundreds of stories of motherfucking on Literotica and I've sampled a great many of them. In my opinion, this is the very best! The excitement builds as two Moms reveal to each other their growing passion for their tall, good-looking sons, especially what the boys are carrying between their legs! Carmen, John's Mom, tells her friend, I've got to see what's making that big bulge in his pants! Donna feels the same way about her boy Shane. The mothers become more and more flirtatious with their sons, giving them glimpses of their tits and even their motherly twats. Like all young males, the boys have an inborn attraction to their mothers' cunts, and soon the lads are hard whenever they're around their Mom. Of course, the mothers notice this and it makes their twats leak like a faucet! Carmen finally tells her friend, We're going to make our sons motherfuckers! The boys are ready, willing, and VERY able to be just that! The first time John slips his hand down his Mom's panties and handles her twat he reports, She's all kinds of wet! When the mothers finally see their sons' big stiff dicks for the first time, they're stunned. Then each son achieves every boy's deepest dream, as he pushes his supersized prick up his mother's tight twat and blow his balls up his own birth canal! It'll be motherfucking heaven from now on!

In this excellent story the action starts with Donna and Carmen, divorced mothers of 18 year old sons, Shane and John, tall, handsome, and very well built! The Moms’ cunts ooze whenever their sons are present and they decide to unleash the lads’ natural motherfucking instincts! They keep upping the ante on revealing attire and sexy talk, exciting their sons more and more! They note the big bulges under their boys’ flies and the cum stains they find in their bedrooms! The two mothers are obsessed with their sons’ big dicks, and happy that Shane and John sport practically constant hard ons around their mothers! When Carmen models a bikini swimsuit for her son, revealing her ass, tits, and most of her motherly twat, John just stares and creams his jeans! His Mom loves the sight of her boy’s spreading cum stain! The game of dares on the mothers’ computers is meant to make their sons into lusty young motherfuckers, and it works! The boys achieve every son’s deepest wish, when they finger fuck their mothers’ sopping wet fuckholes, ease their big dicks into their Moms’ hungering twats, and blow their balls up the same cunts they came out of!

That you are the King of this genre. Absolutely superb story.

I have been a literotica fan since a long time now...yours has been the singlemost story that I relished so much ... Keep up the good work!

This was yr first story that I read.. but I will read all of them during the next few weeks ... great job!

It felt as if u WERE the mother and felt everything as it transpired... Amazing writing skills!

Great story. Please do more.

How about a lesbian version ? (Mom and daughter)

Thank you for your time.

E.

USA

great story ... never ralised it was too long but you kept the interest as well as the heat

kudos for that

great job done mate

Great buildup...had me oozing precum for 20 minutes...gotta go take care of things...