All Comments on 'Mom's Helping Hands Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
fucking awesome

yo... i check everyday to see if you posted this bro thanks for a awesome read you keep it up man...I CANT FUCKING WAIT for the next one 5 stars hands down

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh yes!

That was so freakin' awesome. Well done. I hope you don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. Best story I've read in sometime now! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yayyy........

After sooo loooong.........

Ok. Nice. Better to come SOON (we hope..).

Won't tell what I really want to say after reading this but....I'll just keep silent & encourage you to continue.

-spec

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
It's back!

Honestly, not my favorite chapter but definitely my favorite story. Can't wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
BRAVO! BRAVISSIMOOO!

Well... the time has come, I've been waiting for three months but it is worth it. I love this story and can't wait to read part 5. You go on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
YES

Been so long since last chapter, but it's alive!

great stuff as always

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
good work

Great story. Empathic characters, realistic mother-son relationship, suspense. I understand that writing so well requires time, but three months?! Just a little faster, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Perhaps part 2 was better but this is still one of the best stories I've read on this site. Highest score as always.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
So glad that you're back!

I'm so glad that you're back! I can't believe that I missed out on reading the next part of the story for so long!

The story is your baby, so to say, and it's up to you how you want to take it forward, but please let it have a happy ending! The wheels have been set in motion, with the mom divorcing the father, but I would dearly love to see the mother joining her son while he's at college, and living as a happy couple.

Thanks once more, now I'm going to go and read the first 3 parts again!

Crocodile666Crocodile666over 10 years ago
Great story

Wow! How had I not come across this one before? I've read through all the chapters today and this is definitely one the best series of the mom/son theme that's been posted on here in quite some time. Looking forward to see what the next chapter brings. Personally id love to see him giving his mothers breasts the love and attention they deserve with his hands, mouth and eventually cock. The way you have described them they certainly sound like they deserve to get a nice coating of spunk!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
really wonderful story

There is something magical about this story, something I can't even define. Maybe the previous chapters are more psychologically convincing than the last, because I think the mother gives up her privates a little too quickly, but this is an extraordinary and compelling story. Part 5 ASAP, please! I just love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More chapters, please!!!

It's just getting better.

CYANIDE_KIDDCYANIDE_KIDDabout 10 years ago
hey,

What was your name again?

Still waitin on ya.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
GREAT STORY

Wish my mom were just like this one, so caring and sexy. Next chapter soon please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
BOO...

....FUCK!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Outstanding erotica

The characters are just fantastic. I long to read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hellooo!?

Hey, dude, I'm still waiting here... what happened to the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hot!

Had a great time!!!!!!!!

Would love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
An almost perfect love story...

between a mother and her loving son.

Just needs a part 5! Please!

chytownchytownalmost 10 years ago
You Write A Hot Story****

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
climax

The liar author never finished this story, why because this story is as sorry as ....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
End ???

Waiting for the next chapter since ages !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Waiting for more

Well...I still hope that one day you'll write a further chapter...I can't forget this story... please, keep writing

Mebtaz2000Mebtaz2000over 9 years ago
Ending???

I hope you can end this story. Its a such a well written story all it needs is an ending for the readers.

searealsearealover 9 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Thanks to everyone for all of your comments.

I promise I read every one of them, good or bad.

Even the criticism I've received on these stories, while sometimes harshly worded, have helped me get better as a writer and better shape the story.

I stand by Chapter 4, but I'm not as happy as I could have been with it, and I'm trying not to let the same thing happen to chapter 5.

I've re-written it probably half a dozen times already. I promise you I will end this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Chapter 5

Awesome story. It has been almost a year since you posted Chapter 4. Hope you bring out Chapter 5 soon.....YFB

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great news! Thank you

It's such a relief to know that you'll write more. Don't worry too much about the (very few, by thw way) critical comments. You're an amazing author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story!!! & when is chapter 5?

Thanks so much for sharing such a good story. Checking this website to see whether you have an update chapter is now my daily routine. When is the estimated time for you to post chapter 5? Thanks again and keep up good work.

DougntexasDougntexasover 9 years ago
Great job.........

I do not want to see you end this story, I want to see you add about 5 more chapters................

DougNTexas

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
To be continued......

........when? Going nutso here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Perfect

Absolutely perfect, so don't wait to go on with more chapters. It has a perfect built up over these 4 chapters and a lot of possibilities. Please don't let us wait no more. She could get addicted to her relief sessions aswell and change to different positions. Where his cock get's close to her privates and they get carried away. Or they could have blowjobsessions with several orgasms in a row....so many possibilities you made up here, use them. We are all desperately waiting for more.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Such a long waiting...

Still waiting for your next upload... please I check almost every week

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Great where is the next chapter

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 8 years ago

It's been almost two years since this was written. I think we can forget about this being continued. I hate it when writers do that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please continue writing

Last week officially hit waiting two years... I still hope to read more chapters. I am still attached to these characters.

CYANIDE_KIDDCYANIDE_KIDDover 7 years ago
TO BE CONTINUED...

....damn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
2 years +

What the hell happened?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Continue

Dear seareal,

Please go on with that. This is one of the best stories in here I know. Go on :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

Great story and we need to read more episodes in this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
ONE OF THE BEST

Awesome story.....Interesting and exciting at the same time..

Looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awsome

Thanks, We need you to continue this story!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
One of the All Time Best

Waiting eagerly for some more from you or at least please continue this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More more more!

Please please finish the story. Beautifully written, love the detail which conveys the realistic mood.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
psh

if 2020/2021 hasnt done enough that cuckold is getting way to popular, here i go and read a story with no fucking ending. so i made my own ending. the father comes home sees son and wife fucking each other and so he kills his wife, takes her place sucking off his son and taking it up the ass. for the M. Night Shyamalan twist the dad is actually seareal. #dab

MrStygianHMrStygianHalmost 3 years ago

But where, oh where is our sequel???

*#Saysthewriterwhopromisedasequelhimselfyetstillhasnotwrittenit*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Good story

But try to learn the past tense of words.

He pulls should have been he pulled.

He lays should have been he laid.

It was almost like you were moving to present tense than staying in past.

WomanlickingpleaserWomanlickingpleaserover 2 years ago

I have been really enjoying this series and would really like for it to continue, Please MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really great story, I hope to see this continued when you get the chance!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

please finish

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fucking Amazing!!!

4Leather4Leatherabout 2 years ago

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Please great job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Can't wait for next chapters ..

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

Wonderful story. Although written 9 years ago, I hope the author continues to develop this story. The mother's sexual and emotional epiphany was beautiflly experienced. It is unfortunate that she refuses to accept her son as a man as well as her son. Hopefully, once she realizes the safety, security and unconditional love he freely offers, she may mature into more than being a mother.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

After 9 years where is the chapter 5 dude ? Wtf 9 years is enough for school student to graduate as a doctor from university come on man

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Such a wonderful and heartfelt story. The love that they have for each other is real.

FIVE STARS!!!

TheOldStudTheOldStudabout 1 year ago

This was an excellent story, probably the best of the 'Helping Hands' themed ones. It has the right pace and character build-up, with near-perfect chapter length. It appears that it's dead, since seareal hasn't been heard from in quite a while. Where is FinishTheDamnStory when you need him??

DogmancyprusDogmancyprusabout 1 year ago

Yet another unfinished story, such a pity it was well developed.

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