by LostSoulz
I like the story. There's nothing like the love between the mother and son. One thing did confuse me, when his wife's mother said she was coming to see him at the Holiday House, she said it take her a couple of hours. In the next sentence, he said he heard her outside in 10 minutes. Big time difference I would think. I still like the story and hope to see the love get stronger between him and his mother. Thanks for your time and imagination.
There are still some grammatical errors to clean up but overall a much better effort. I too was confused with the timing of the MIL as is pointed out. Looking forward to a possible threesome(?).
Got to fuck two big breasted women in one day! Lucky guy. Can't wait for chapter 3!