by Cockhole
If I could give this story 10 stars, I would. Great followup to the first chapter! Not only was it smoking hot, it was five pages long so you could really get into the story as well as the sex. And to have the second chapter come out only three days after the first one was a real bonus. You're used to waiting a month or two for the next chapter so this was a real treat! Thank you for that!!
Great second chapter, cannot wait for the next instalment, i hope is comes as quick as this 1.
I usually don’t read multiple stories, but this is now a favorite. Wonderful dialogue and ideas. Please, please keep it up.
I never comment - your stories are fantastic! Keep up the good work!
Great build-up. I'd love to see more of this kind of stuff, and less of the... other stuff.
dont want this story to end.plz write as many chapters as possible.fantastic work so far
I don't know if this story is the best but it sure is the best one I read this year.
The plot is original and almost believable (which is hard to do in incest). Mother/son sexual relationship is such a taboo it has to unfold either slowly or find a crazy situation. Your way of doing is pure genius. You take it step by step and so far so good.
You also have insane talent in sex scenes. Some authors are great and give a good story but with short scenes that aren't that exciting. You write ones the best sex scenes in erotica.
Keep up the good work.
Your story is one of the hottest on this or any site. You are slowly building it up with enough happening to keep the readers interest. I log on every morning hoping there will be another chapter. I am not a fan of too many chapters to a story but you have hooked me.
i really like the slow build up.would like 1 chapter for every new sexual act titjob,bj,sex etc so this story lasts longer.it is sooooo great so far.well done and keep them coming &cumming
This story takes it's time without being boring. I love how the mother does turn to a slut minutes after telling her son she does not approve.
One thing, it would have been more believable if her breasts weren't so large.
Great story, looking forward to chapter 3
love how nice and slow the story is going not jumping right into the sex like other stories do...Love the build up would like to see the mother still be a bit nervous and reluctant to have sex with her son to make it a bit more real. Would love to see maybe another woman or man enter into the movies with them once the mother and son have full sex . Mother and son going deeper and deeper into the porn world together
I agree with those saying they like this story. I think the way you are taking the story is great. When they finally DO get together for sex it is going to be epic for both of them
I love the stories and and the slow, simmering build.
I hate having to wait for the next one, but that's my own impatience.
Keep up the awesome work!
Another great chapter. I am looking forward to read how the story progresses. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work.
can't wait for the next one, make it as long as you can
considering that they have decided to earn with the videos it is time that the mother dresses like real MILF, outfit sexy and transgressive intimates, 5" high heels and start to be a little bit more whore. If they really want to do Businness and money with the porn will have to always go a little further and surprise their audience or they will have little success, right?
Very hot, sitting here with a hard on, can't wait till mommy gets more of that cock.
I can't wait until chapter 03. I have been hard for hours !!!
Now that Ben and Tiffany have decided to do their 'professional roles' in the videos, things should get interesting. Once you start doing porn, it is hard to stop and things just keep going and going. Once Tiffany seeing the what folks say about her in the comments of the videos, she'll be hooked. It happens. And getting paid for doing it is even better.
It has been a long time since I had found an interesting mom-son story in literotica.
Same ' divoced/widow mom' stuff kept on pumping... I was kind of fed up. At last came in this story!!!!thanks a lot mate...
Fantastic series thus far. I can echo the sentiments of all the others about pacing and development, etc. Brilliant. And you teased it about it a little in this chapter but I am hoping that "Benny" gets to have an all out tit-fuck, complete with pearl necklace before they are done !
Wow. Just so many possibilities here. Kudos.
I agree with several here - the viewers would definitely be encouraging and suggesting harder and more perv things. Mom seems to be especially on board once the camera's rolling!
I love the length, the detail, the story, the build up, keep the pace down. I see things are ratcheting up as Tiffany has released many inhibitions but she’s still reluctant to go much further just yet. Love everything about this story! Keep it up!!
The first chapter really set this story up well.
This chapter has continued that theme, and is quite an involving storyline.
Please keep going.
It’s a great story. Can’t wait for the 3rd. Been holding off on cumming as I read because the anticipation is so good. My pussy has been dripping since he first chapter.
2 chapters and 12 pages yet the most that's happened is mom masterbated him. Beginning to get boring.
The story evolves slowly, by design, but Ch. 3 is out tomorrow and should satisfy most enthusiasts. Chapter 4 is being edited. I'm hoping it will post toward the end of this week or beginning of next. Thanks for reading!
The best stories have a slow step by step approach. Not the "mom is my slut in 2 minutes" crap. Best story here since Measuring My Cum
I'm loving the story. The pace is good. Mom is reacting as I think that she would, reticent but she can't get enough of his cock. I assume that she is going to have a masterbation scene with her son either in real life or in the movie. Maybe the movie scene will be after she does it in real life. Oh well, what do I know, you're the writer.
or hot, hotter, Cockhole!
Thank you for this instant classic... I have read all three parts today and I usually do not read more than five or six pages per day.
I hope there will be way more chapters.
I love stories that go slowly and gradually. It's like the first part is also 5 stars!
Five pages long, and incremental with the heat and it is heat.
I love incest stories that involve family members filming themselves and making it public for the world to see. It just sucks that there arent enough of them on literotica. Thank you so much for this. I hope you make more video-themed incest stories in the future.
Damn! I could feel that one! The anticipation had me on edge. Finally, she made a move.
Great story again keeping it unfolding at a good pace .
Very sexy
I love your slow build up between them, great pace and it keeps me on the edge through it!
Great story. You are creating wonderful slow build-up throughout these two chapters. Looking forward to reading next chapter and find out the next level they reach.