by TheBigCheese123
More chapters with more exploration is called for. BJ's, doggy, teasing, mom joining, anal, maybe even some bandage..
Mom and sis need to go on the pill, so he can cum bare inside them as is meant to be.
More please, Just the two of them and maybe they fall in love and want noone else. they could stay together and make babies.
"I was eating cereal in my pyjama bottoms"
How the cereal -got- in my pyjama bottoms, I'll never know.
I have mixed feelings on this story. This certainly isn't the -worst- premise for twincest, it's quirky and decently compassionate compared to a lot of the stuff on this site, but it starts on an awkward foot and never quite recovers. Perhaps with more emotional development it'd counterbalance the absurdity of Mom's instigation, but as written it's a bit too fast to stick.
Definitely bring the mom in. She could help teach both of them with a greater hands on approach. Great start!
Well done essay from a creative mind. This leads me to believe that you, and your sister really are twins.
Further development, from your fertile mind, needs no suggestions from me.
Please, carry on . . .
Liked the storyline but it needed some descriptions of their orgasms. Felt like a big omission.
Get someone to prove read your stories....."her push gripped me tightly, but, not uncomfortably" and in the beginning you said they were both virgins,if that's the case why didn't he break her hymen? Otherwise a good story.
Beautiful, but i just need them to make love to each other without a condom, that is just so beautiful, they will fall in love with each other, be together forever...
Maybe they should thank mom properly and make love to her too, she needs it and they love her so much.
Loved it but you needed more info at the start like where's the father how old mother is!! Continue this with brother and sister joining their mother in bed and have sex with her and bother and sister fall in love and have children and all 3 live together as a happily family!!!!!!!!!!!! 5 stars