All Comments on 'Mom's Journal Ch. 02'

I haven't read this chapter yet, but the introduction kinda pissed me off a little. If an author writes something you don't like then skip it an move on. No one is forcing you to read anything on this site. I have been a Leatherman for over 30 years, and while cutting isn't something I am into, I know many people that do enjoy it (I also know that there are many who suffer from certain mental issues where they intentionally hurt themselves by cutting, but that is not what this is about). It is about what some call "sensual cutting" and it is way more popular among some folks than you would believe. So if you don't like something then stop reading. I do the same thing when someone lights up a cigarette or joint. As soon as I see someone in a story "light up", I immediately stop reading and move on. So stop the damn whining, and move on!!!

Please continue with this series. You do have a talent for this.

This is so cool, a son finding such a sexy journal from you mom. Hope you write more.

Love the direction this is going in. Great story line, can't wait for the next installment.

Don't let comments bully you into taking out elements like the cutting. A little nick on the boob is very tame compared to some story lines. But even if it wasn't, it's your story, not theirs. Constructive criticism is one thing, but "I'm not into that, so don't have it in your story," is another. That said, I will offer a little constructive criticism there. You might have elaborated on that a bit, maybe have the son act shocked to read it. He might even become concerned about his mother. He might even think he needs to take matters in his own hands before him mother hurts herself.... Just suggestions. It's your story, not mine.

needs a third chapter ! VERY hot and original. While I have know a few people who are into cutting, I find it a personal turnoff . That said , it was a minor part o the story and I REALLY like what you have put together. Thanks, looking for more , from you

Love the story line and the pace. The dreams get nice and nasty (I love Nasty) and into detail making it hot and messy on my end (LOL). Hope you will come back to this series it has tons of potential for many more chapters taking Mom deeper and deeper into her dark/submissive side. Stay Naughty, please write more, it is an exciting story theme.

Nadine

A side note: Could use a little editing assistance

You can't stop here.