All Comments on 'Mom's Lapse to Depravity'

by Msomi

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BoxcarbillBoxcarbillalmost 4 years ago
Better than a Three...

Not quite a Four. Despite the difference in English, the story was easy to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Your use of ridiculously complex words ruined the story for me. You need an editor that uses english as a first language.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggalmost 4 years ago
Five'd It

Mostly for the foreign setting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Foreign names lead to confusion.

You get 6 or 8 of them, and it gives me a headache trying to keep track of who is who. Mother and son fucking is my favorite!

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