All Comments on 'Mom's Massage'

Seems like a 12 year old wrote this.

No less than 22 spurts of cum! Really, even fantasy has to keep a certain level of reality and 22 spurts is so totally ridiculous. One other thing about most of these stories is the need to have the mom"s with humongous tits. Why is that? This story seems a bit infantile and tits that size are going to sag, period!

This was like a trip to FANTESY ISLAND,all we needed was mr. roke and tatoo.......... THANKS

If you tit fuck somebody with your bra on your penis would be raw! I noticed the penis size changed every other sentence! Had to stop reading very unrealistic. I give it a 1!

Nice idea for a story but I would have liked a slower build up to the sex and have them slowly seduce each other during the massage first, maybe have it take place over a few weeks or months. Over than that its a good read.

22 spurts. Get real. Looks like this has been written by a kid. And at what point did she take her jogging pants off?

So many people get upset about the unreal aspects of the tits or the dick, but there plenty of us that really enjoy reading a story of fantastic proportions. Keep up the exciting themes and write for you. If you think it's hot many of us do too. I love the idea of huge cocks and huge tits!

i liked the story but the spurting was unreasonable and you need to proof the story first because you change his name in the story at least once.

Who's Jeff? The name of the son kept changing.

either you messed up from typing out 2 stories at once or you stole this changed the names and missed a spot

> Extremely tall at 6'3"

Where do you live to consider that extremely tall? In the Shire?

You're so great

I don't care about names changing or whatever. I love the outrageous proportions of the massive titties and huge dicks. Keep letting those fat dicks penetrate mom's tight pussy while the huge titties bounce everywhere. Hope to see more soon

That was fantastic

bought

He describes her as slim.....then goes on to thick hips, MASSIVE tits and full butt.

That's not slim.

The described tits are abnormal....get realistic kid.

My biggest complaint is that Mom wouldn't even take off her bra during the massage, not even during the "titfuck". As soon as he cums (for the second time) she is ready to "Now baby, are you ready to fuck mommy's pussy?"

That's an unrealistic change. Poor writing, ridiculous imagination.

When he shoots off for the 3rd time he counts down from 5? Like a nasa launch? Smh

"If you find the above not to your taste then kindly fuck off" ah yes, the mark of a man who oozes self-confidence. Get better at writing.

very bad

Can we please stop calling it Baby Batter? Not just for this story but every other story too

It was going along nicely with a good build up, then the writer got bored, and said "Fuck the build up, let's go straight from tentative massage, to him fucking the tiny cartoon character with tits bigger than any woman in history, with his giant cock that spurts a million loads a second".

Could have been good, but then the child brain took over, and made the mom into a life support system for a town dairy, and turned the son into a talking hosepipe. Pity.

It was like the writer took three or four paragraphs from each story on this site with the same topic.

Heard it, heard it, heard it.

Grammar/spelling/punctuation: 9.7

Story length: 7.9

Originalty factor: 0.1

And, how possible is 36M all-natural?

Eleven inches, 22 cum spurts? "M" sized tits? what bull shit.

I dislike BULLSHIT. 36M....??? 11" dick...? 22 shots of cum....?

If you're going to write, be reasonable. It will much more enjoyable for the readers if you write logical

and reasonable statements.

Fabulous

Yeah, I know it's fiction/fantasy but so many things wrong with this story!