All Comments on 'Mom's New Family Affair Ch. 03'

This is fantastic!

you are doing great, just keep up the fine work!

PERFECT CHAPTER!!!

Loved it. Not rushed, not dragged out. Just the right pace, and made believable by the sensual buildup. Really looking forward to the next chapters.

Smoking hot series! Can't wait til you include the son/boyfriend in the games.

But all of the typos and grammar problems are distracting. Better proofreading would greatly enhance the story. These errors are what is keeping the story from being a 5

Very hot, very sensual, very erotic.

Really enjoyed reading and masturbating for you.

Steve

I love this story so far! The pacing is perfect and I'm glad that the flirting is all there before mindless fucking ensues. Thank you and I will try and stop to comment as much as possible but my need-2-read may force me forward! But I will surely send you some comments once I get to the latest chapter (18.)

So descriptive! The details were SO thorough! Your style is amazing. The only distraction was some of the pronouns and a spell checker doesn't always pick 'em up! Thank you for continuing.

Great chapter, an excellent seduction scene, unfortunately who was doing what to whom was not easy to distinguish as names and personal pronouns were absent.