All Comments on 'Mom's New Family Affair Ch. 23'

I like the light scat touch to it. Also, make him alittle less squeamish about getting stuff in his butt. Would be hot for the more to do dirty stuff to him back there

Every thing ends accept it seems this way too long story.

Please use your great talent to write a new story.

Thanks a lot

I must admit I love htlvgcpl's style of writing and if they were to come up with another individual story every so often I'd read it, but there are those of us that like this ongoing story and don't mind how it goes on from chapter to chapter. It's like watching a TV series, if your get bored with it, don't bother watching it and just go on. Considering the ranking of all the files in the series so far, I'm not so sure I'm the only one that feels this way.

Try looking at the rating for this story before you make a comment about how good ratings are. Another thing, readers can enjoy the writings of an author(s) and feel they have jumped the shark on a particular storyline and wish the author(s) to turn their great talent(s) to something better or recover the current story to its glory. At this juncture it's less a story than it is about getting people to fuck each other in new and interesting ways. Example: Beth and Darla have never met John's father and only know him to be a philanderer and an absentee father but the very first suggestion at allowing John's father join the group they would LOVVVVVVE to fuck him because it "would be HAWWWWWT"! Oh and John is completely down with cutting his pussy time in half by sharing with dad as long as it's what the girls want. None of those are positions rational people would take.

With the introduction of Beth's dad it gets even muddier because John now shares Beth and soon will share Darla and his mother with another man. And the most John gets out of it is he gets to hear the stories of fucking afterwards. Oooo. In a survey taken among every man that has ever lived, when given the choice between hearing THE STORY OF how another person fucked their lover(s) OR fucking their lover(s) one million percent of men chose TO FUCK THEIR LOVERS. Except John. The lone exception.

Of John, his mom, Beth, and Darla all four have equal access to the others as lovers so none are getting "more" sex than any of the others. They formed the group out of love. That is what they said and agreed to. But currently the ladies are introducing men that the ladies can share and fuck with each other but leave John out in the cold since he is heterosexual. Oh wait. John will probably get to have a threesome and share Beth with her father. WOW. Hot. Congratulations John, you used to fuck Beth all by yourself and have her undivided attention but it's sooooooo much hotter for you share Beth with half of her attention given to another guy. A MFM three way may sound hot but it isn't a reason to destroy a plot just to write it. I'll willing accept that John would be willing to do it just to make Beth happy but there is nothing on the horizon in which John, our protagonist, gets to make himself happy. If John is simply a cuckold that's fine. Just tell us John's merely a cuckold blow up this story and most of us will never bother reading any more. Because right now John is nothing more than a mule. He's dick, there simply for the pleasure of the ladies. Why bother with caring about his story. Oh and adding Eleanor wouldn't actually balance out Beth and her dad because the other ladies get to have Beth's dad and would most likely get a crack at Eleanor also. John wouldn't get anything the ladies wouldn't also get

we need chapter 25!!!!