All Comments on 'Mom's-Rebirth'

More of the same please

Can't wait for more!!!

Lucky sister!

IMO you built a good plot with Mom glad to be alive and newly reborn as a sexual being and wanting to say thanks with some hot sex. OK, that works up to a point.

You had a nice little pas-de-deux with mom and the son, where it was special and neat. Then you blew it with me when you decided mom's a equal-opportunity slut sharing the cream-pie with Linda.

I don't mind mom or Linda getting a Sapphic groove on, but the whole thing that makes incest stories pop for me is when it's the right kind of wrong out of mutual love, lust, respect worth busting the taboo over. When the taboo's not even a speed-bump, there's no tension and it becomes Lego porn.

You can argue, sometimes sex is just about getting off but it makes it a lot less meaningful to the participants and to me reading it.

However, if that's the story you gotta write and gets you off, cool. Thanks for sharing.

So the son and daughter cuckold the dad and they are fine with it.

I guess in their minds (in the story), it is okay as long as they eventually tell him. Such respect for their father...

Continue the story please.

I'd like to read about him, his sister and mom having threesomes, where he fucks them into submission, and the two women will do anything he wants to get his cock.

A good hot storyline.

Thanks for the read.

Fucking his sister.

"it was all white with tiny straps and a thong bottom." Hmm. Must be year 2099 AD.

Linda is wasted here. Mom's progression ok up until just after the voyeurism.

Went south after that.

I agree with txcoatl1970 and won't bother reading the sequel.

-spec

Like many, I would like to read more about how this family love grows. I hope that dad is not left out very long. I could see the daughter seducing her dad in the morning.

Please continue.

short but incredible. don't make us wait too long for part 2 please. thanks.

I want to read about Linda & mom, Linda & her brother, and then mom & the twins together.

Will you please follow up on it?

I liked the story. Too bad the author was a one shot one and done type author. As this was written over two years ago, I don't anticipate the sequel any time soon.

I enjoyed this but wonder if you will ever be able to produce a sequel? Judging by the ending, this was your intention. The story was spoilt a little by silly mistakes. You should get yourself a proof reader or even a helpful friend. M222RJR

I gave it 4 stars only because it's 1 page.

Sloppy seconds? Not my cup of tea

great story, wish it was longer

I would have liked it better if her pussy been described as being massively hairy. Even better, if it had not been dad's cum but rather her own brothers cum who was staying with them. I would have eaten her pussy to orgasm if it had been my sexy uncles cum been leaking out of her hairy pussy. You need to finish the story.