All Comments on 'Mom's Secret Past Life'

by Dingo_Triplesix

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DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Very exciting story. I would love to see a second chapter if you're planning on it.

GingerCat1GingerCat1over 2 years ago

You are a really good writer and I liked the story a lot. One minor criticism, which I hope is constructive, there is not enough of a gap between mother seeing son masturbating, and mother deciding to have sex with her son. Ideally there would be a bigger build up between those two events.

Other than that I enjoyed this story a lot.

EZ8ltEZ8ltover 2 years ago

Nice but too short honestly, or there could be continuations between the two since they basically just started and the guy is a beginner.

blaster666blaster666over 2 years ago

Excellent! You have a gift for storytelling. 5 stars

muskyboymuskyboyover 2 years ago

Seemed tragic to me, for both of them.

winterplayingwinterplayingover 2 years ago

Great story! Thank you. I would love to see more from you.

smltwnguysmltwnguyover 2 years ago

Nice work. Hope to see more from you.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 2 years ago

Nice. Can't wait for part two.

krakbaknsak58krakbaknsak58over 2 years ago

Dingo, I hope you grace us with further chapters, as I would love to know what Irina wants to show her son. Then there is the possibility of adding other characters and expanding on the story.

Bronco56Bronco56over 2 years ago

Great story. Well written and hot. Would love to see more chapters.

5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Just came across this and it was awesome it was very well written and the timing of the sex was great and how he brought his mother out of her shell was nice! Would be nice if you would have written more of this!!!! Gave it 5 stars

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Writing erotica since I was 12 years old... German author, this is my international profile. Yeah, I´m translating now, so look for shelter from low-flying language errors... See Dingo666 for the German profile.