by BlueJames
To be honest, when you said rewrite, I thought you were going to focus on the mom-son aspect, like the mom only helping her son and work fully on his confidence with not only sex but in general.
But oh well, onto my review...
Though I'm glad you decided to at least show the mother being more resistant to Hayden and his dick, you still kind of placed him as her automatic favorite. The first example being that she got wet instantly when she saw it, another is that she mentioned the size being perfect for her, and lastly that she 'lost control' when holding it. Unless of course that's in the plan down the line.
Side note, I'm also glad you at least made Charlie's dick more of a stand out than last time. But I'm okay and able to look beyond all of the rest as long as you don't have the mom lusting crazily after Hayden instead of her son like last time. Like, she can like his dick but hate his personality.
Was good but when his friends joined in I lost interest. Not for me and I wont be reading this series. 2.5*
CHUCK
A Lawyer with a heart, interesting.
Looking forward to your future chapters regarding the boy's experience with ma'am.
More importantly how the strong lawyer, now a teaching ma'am turns to slut loving mom.
Wowwww... Great storyline. I love your idea and the way your story builds. Can’t wait for your next chapters.
I had been looking for this story for a long while and am glad you reposted it. I like that your taking a new approach with it and making the mother more resistant to Hayden. While his extra big cock is a temptation she would still have other factors driving her choices, and in the original version she seemed to give into Hayden to easily, especially since he was acting like a cunt to her son.
You lost me at the beginning: Charlie wakes up and goes to breakfast and says it’s the weekend, then tells his mom he has to leave for school soon. Inconsistencies like that always make me stop reading.
I love the premise and the story. I just wish you hadn't given the asshole in the group an 11" cock. Couldn't 9" have been enough? Looking forward to the next chapter.
can't get past the first page....have tried 3 times now.... will try again...maybe i should skip to pages 2 3 or 4 where something will capture my interest on my favorite topic
like other comments i like how you made the mom more reluctant with hayden. i hope you keep Hayden out of most of the fun and focus more on the son.
Totally unimpressed. Why on earth would a son who loved his mother want to share her with his friends. ONE star is over generous.
Started okay, but when she included his friends in teaching, especially the bully, you lost me.
i like the story, but i want to read the previous chapter, where i can read it?
I first thought, you were going to focus on the mom-son aspect. I liked the beginning, but when his friends joined in, especially Hayden, you placed him as her automatic favorite, I was losing interest. Not for me, I don't like his personality at all.
Agree with the other commenters. I would have preferred a story about only a mom and her son or maybe include the other guy who couldn’t last but the bully is kinda a dick. I feel like he is using the son and that other friend to make himself feel powerful. Dogshit Friend is seems like. If you have a friend like this you deserve better.
Someone know a similar stories where a mom help built confidence and the boy know more that the mom? The part 3 could be late this year maybe if we have luck
Loved the series, eagerly waiting for next chapter! Maybe if Charlie gains his confidence by knocking out hayden who tries to blackmail his mother into having sex with him. Thus making Charlie his mom's hero and man of the house, later on life he successfully develops a course for stamina training for any guy who is unconfident. Anyways I'll leave the storytelling to you.(:
I gotten turn off when I found that his friends gotten involved.
The Title was misleading and it should be : Mom help her son and friends with stamina training