by Treated2
The Donna/Laura situation aside, this was a good chapter. Obviously, I hope that in the next chapter they swap sons, and that the two women eat each other out. Further on, I hope they leave their respective husbands and move in together as a couple to raise the new kids that their sons planted in their wombs over this trip. The sons, of course, come back home as often as possible to fuck their moms and help raise their kids.
I believe that the first part of the story was a complete perfectly written story with a plot. I don't think that this continuation would add any new idea just describing a f-n process. That's it. I believed if author would like to write continuation it would be moms' share or story not in the same hotel (for example somewhere else foursome party or something like this). That's it.
Great story, except for the name change. Looking forward to the next part, hopefully sooner than the last. 5*
@ Treated2:
RE read, or re, re read before posting. That will allow you to catch the name change from Donna to Laura.
I corrected the name snafu, don't know how I missed it! New version in editor's hands.
I can't believe I got through a mother / son incest story without "sweetie" or anal sex ruining the story.
This was truly a joy, masterful how you built on that radio show they were all listening to. Superb titillation.
I hope there's more... I'd say a game of strip poker in a 4-man tent is in order.
hah! I read before the name fix... got all worked that somehow a third pair had arrived.
Dona, Laura and Cindy. Lost the names did we? Still a hot story and followup. Time fir a full swap
Loved it! Hopefully there'll be a third chapter coming. Five stars and a favorite point!