All Comments on 'Mom's Titfuck Ch. 01'

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go with size K for breasts since you go outrageous there why not go with 12 or 14 inch dick

Just a bit of advice from a guy that makes his living writing fiction. The first rule of writing is to be able to suspend the reader's sense of disbelief. You didn't make the cut.

You should check your punctuation, especially with quotation marks. I also agree with the other comment about making the dick size ridiculous too.

A very nice premise for a story, with lots of nice details.

I just wish you had submitted the entire story, as it stands now it is very short, even for a "chapter one". I was left wanting more! :-)

Great natural flowing conversation between mother and son. More mothers should share their inquisitive thoughts about their sons size.

This story was nice,but really it was unbelievable. I mean most mother's don't have the guts to talk to their grown sons like the mother in this made up story did. If you're going to write a sex story,make it very erotic and believable.

Please continue this story!

Its a very good story bring the reader and setting the stage for hard sex as both Mom and her son are really aroused now. I sure hope you write more soon as this story has so many possibilities. Cannot wait for more, very nice beginning and thank you.

Really good story. Can't wait to go read pt 2!

I prefer smaller tits, B cup is perfect, but as long as they are HER'S, they are fine.

I have to laugh when someone refers to "perky D cups. By 30, usually sooner, her nipples are looking aqt her kneecaps.