All Comments on 'Mom's Touch But Don't Look Policy'

This story demands a sequel. Absolutely fantastic!

I thought that the story was excellent. The pace was even and the story flowed very well. I'm in agreement with others. The story deserves a sequel expanding on Jay's and Julie's relationship and the separation and probable divorce with her husband. I'm assuming that her being pregnant will be a motivating factor.

The story was really beautiful, I enjoyed reading it. The problems that "I" felt was....

1. the story was too lengthy

2. details about the female body

3. details/ build up while doing the deed

Dont get me wrong, I really did enjoy reading it and these problems are just as per my taste. other than that, If i wouldnt have read this story, I would have been missing on something thats real good.

Thanks for sharing.

This story was brilliantly written. And for those who think there needs to be a sequel, I think it was like Shawshank Redemption. Yes, there’s more to their story but it doesn’t have to be written.

Absolutely brilliant. The story gets hotter and emotionally deeper at the same time. While they help each other to quench their sexual urges they are closing the emotional rift that had developed between mother and son, the sex being a catalyst to not go back to what they had, but to go beyond, just beautiful. And mom using this as a way out of the boring and unfulfilling rut her life has become.

The story is more believable than most because the son, while being a virale young man, showing signs of mental and emotional maturity. So the talk during sex about owning his mom and so on really comes off as playful pillow talk and , oddly, as a way to commit to their new relationship. It's set off and contrasted by him telling her to basically change her life, not for the benefit of anyone else, but for herself.

This was really satisfying to read an many different levels, thank you!

Please make a part 2.. wow..

I truly liked this story. The relationship between mother & son was very deep even before they became lovers. I was glad to see that he didn't take her for granted but rather encouraged her to grow outside of her existing world. I was pleasantly surprised when she showed up at school as a new student. I would really like to see a sequel to this story as they grow in their relationship as well as her being pregnant and him realizing that he will soon be a daddy/big brother. I usually don't write comments as most of the time

Great story*****

Frog 308

Schrödinger‘s wank! Quantum incest, nice!

Great story. Would love a sequel.

Great story wasn’t too keen on the ending though you need to continue on there’s so much more to this story…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Excellent! Definitely needs to be continued. It will be interesting to see how Julie acclimates to college life, how the mom/son relationship progresses & the father get his comeuppance! The passion & connection they have seems to be a great foundation for a lifetime relationship!

Excellent ending to the story. Don't listen to the others, you end a story and move on. Anything more would detract from the style of the situation as you told it.

Great story. Masterfully written.

Story became more engaging as it progressed. Funny how repressed both characters were by the spectre of the father but glad they got out from under that rock. Well written and well crafted.

The humour was infectious! The passion compelling! 5 Stars

TO BE CONTINUED PLEASE, BUT THEM TOGETHER

Sexy, wistful, well done

Nicely done, actually brilliant. Well written also.

An enjoyable read.

Bill S.

good!!!An enjoyable read.

"Perhaps," Mom said, "But why don't we keep that under the covers. For now."

Damn. That was so hot. Really enjoyed it. 5/5

Nato_

"For a moment, I could see Mom's bare pussy. Covered in thick, blonde pubic hair. Her labia engorged and deep pink from the stimulation, hanging wide open lewdly." How did you know what my mom looked like? When a woman gets horny she is a force to be reckoned with, even one's own mom. Sexually aggressive women are exciting.

Extremely Well Written

Just imagine the future football player there son could have if they have a boy since he basically have the same genetics as his dad and his mother and his grandfather

Brilliant! How could I have missed this?! Is there a part 2? Pls go on! Thank you for the story!!!

Would love a sequal

Fantastic, the whole story I envisioned the mom as the Mom from Modern Family, Julie B. Made the story even hotter. Thanks for writing.

Wow this was fantastic. Real deal. Not too fast not boringly slow either. Good job

Fantastic story.

Too much good. Cannot put it in words. 10/10

Loved it!

Great story, thanks for sharing.

5⭐️s, without question.

Added to my favorites.

This story is Beautiful. It has what so many others out there are missing. Besides the sex, it has The yearning, tenderness, romance, love, etc that makes an erotic story meaningful (imo). Even the revealed loneliness and sadness pulls the story together. 5🌟 and then some. Hopefully i can find others similarly as good. Thanks to Spector_Dugan for this one.

Beautiful....

Perfect! Loved it the entire way!

I think it is the best story that I have ever found, on literotica.

Absolutely wonderful! Could not stop reading. Thank you for sharing.

Good story but a lame ending.

This is one of my favorite stories. Thank you.

Bravo! Well written, well done. I was moved.

The father’s character was poorly written. I understand the author wanted him to be the bad guy, but his animosity & disparaging of his son’s intelligence did not make sense.

Good story

Kept me reading

"hard " to put down

Know what I mean

Let's hear your story about

Older relatives I tell ya mine

She called him a lady killer and he thought she was calling him a serial abuser? Surely that was a mistake.

Unbelievably hot.

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And the father/husband said that nasty stuff because he was (as ever) deliberately needling his wife. He knew her existence revolved around her "baby boy" and he already "knew" (and reveled in the knowledge) that said "baby boy" had drifted away from her, and (even worse) was going to be leaving her all alone. Being an unmitigated asshole, he took the opportunity to grasp the hilt of the knife that was his knowledge of her adoration of and abandonment by her son, and twist it by insulting said son's intelligence and mental capacity, whilst simultaneously denigrating her own intellect. It's vile, abusive, and quite believable. The "fact" that he "knew" that she could never share her knowledge of his (the father's) true opinion of her son with her son, and that he'd (the nasty father) nonetheless still be closer to him (the clueless son) than her, was just a cancerous cherry on top.

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The thing that makes it beautiful is that all his "knowledge" is wrong, except for the bit about her adoring her son. He's no longer closer to his son than her, his son had no intention of abandoning his mother, and his son could hear every vile word coming out of his mouth. So he's a vile, toxic fool, in more ways than one.

Very good story!!

Title "My mother is a college student".

I'm waiting for part 2

5 Stars.

Amazing writing.

Extraordinary.

This reads like a psych textbook and an issue of penthouse fell into a woodchipper and then was glued together by a creepy dude in a shed who spied on the hot neighbor and her sun at a barbeque. I mean. It was super hot. But, like.... dude. Even in a fantasy. Fetishizing an incestuous pregnancy and making your dad ride in back? There are lists for that kind of thing. Jumpsuit required, scheduled meals baskets and puzzles and ping pong tables and group sharing required- type of... lists!

Notice will be Posted!

I loved it....well done.

Such a beautiful love story .. moving on to fund true love and happiness 💕 .. a second part would be lovely if possible .. I think that she should grow her hair out, she will make a beautiful mom again ☺ 😘

I really liked the escalation and pacing of this. Very hot

Incredible. I have no words. More please.

Some of this was really well done...

Some of it though...

The very typical "Blame the husband/dad" set up to make the cheating and the incest okay.

Never understand where the 'sexy' in pregnancy is, let alone with the MOM, the blood-related MOM...enjoy those kids with three eyes. (No, nobody cares about your blog where some dude says a study from China in 1964 proved no deformities happen from direct incest...)

The ending almost redeemed it, where 'mom' explains how her and dad fell out of love...because that happens. Why the need to make him such a jag though?

I get a lot of guys in history were jerks, and plenty still are, but the constant man-hate is going to turn even the good guys away, make them bitter.

Lazy writing to that end, sorry, NOT sorry.

The father character was one dimensional at best. Just a paper bad guy for no really good reason but to justify the other two's illicit actions.

Over the top and unnecessary.

Kind of ruins the whole story.

The ending with her finding him at college is cute, almost saves it.

A great story. I don't usually bother with smut that's quite this long, but it had me hooked.

The ending was super cute, too.

I really enjoyed this story. It took a while to get to the really hot stuff but it was worth the wait. And I liked the ending.

Hot brilliant story until the ending.the last sex scene and dialogue was rushed and tacky. Would have been better to skip it and picked dad up on time.didnt care for impregnating mum as it ddint add much to the story

I have to say the section just before going back to school felt weird. After seeing mom and son so ready to fuck and breed every time they have a chance to then suddenly pass to such a defeatist tone, almost like they were parting ways forever, it really did clash in a bad way with the rest of this (amazing) story.

The father was obviously the weakest point of the story. So gratuitously mean with the both of them for no apparent reason, to the point he felt more like a comic book villain than a believable character. I'm okay with justifying the cheating aspect, but this felt way too exaggerated.

Still, other than that, I really enjoyed the story quite a bit. I loved how truly raunchy they got in the end (actually wished there was more of that). I'm a fan of impregnation stories, so obviously I also like that part a lot.

Hoping there will be a sequel to this. Would be great seeing mother and son start a family together with lots and lots of incestuous sex.

Ignore the critics!

I’ve known many men like the father and it doesn’t really matter how many dimensions he’s an asshole in, he’s an asshole.

I love the journey with the real emotional back and forth, concerns and “justifications”

One of my favorite stories of all time. I’d log in, but the site is finicky about my vpn atm

I enjoyed this hot story !!!

The progressive build up after every intimate encounter made the story way hotter it was so sexy !!!

I want more stories like this I got so horny reading it !!!

Feltfixer said it already, but I'd like to reiterate I'm so grateful that there were neither 50 inch breasts nor 10 foot long dicks. Just a very, very, very well written story. There are very few stories in here that I have been able to visualise. This was among them. Everything from the kitchen to the lawn to the basement and of course, the characters.

While for a moment, I felt the "am I bigger" and "did you cum when..." bits were over the top, but I realised immediately that it's a 25-year-old, and it made complete sense. Once again, lovely story

Oh great, you have probably just created a wonderful multi-disabled child as a result of inbreeding. The next chapter should be the joys of raising this child.

This is my top 10 story that I re-read very often. As others said, no ridiculous bra size or dick sizes. I could totally buy that this is true story and not fiction. I loved the way you removed the father from the scene systematically from the first call. Amazing.

I can't say I've ever read a story as long as this one. In one sitting at that. Great job and really enjoyed your writing style.

To Faceless: The tone was clearly somber because of the situation. If you think the father was unnecessarily mean then you are fortunate to have had a good one, I hope. I've known far worse. In my opinion this was all very realistic, much more than I usually read, not just here but at all. And I read a lot. No disrespect intended, these are just our opinions.