All Comments on 'Moms Unexpected Playdate'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

So sexy and hot. A story I didn’t know I needed. Next chapter please!!!! I need more.

Winger534Winger534over 3 years ago
More!

Yes, we def need another chapter of Beth & Clark...Great plot...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Chapter 2

Very good so far. Pls continue the story.a

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story!

More! More! More! That ending definitely left openings for more chapters!

HragsHragsover 3 years ago
Good job....Fantastic Story..

Hope you will continue with Beth & Clark's relationship. Will he finish college early ? Will he get drafted , sign w/ a Major League baseball team ? Please add more chapters.ty

4702david4702davidover 3 years ago
Great Story

Need the next chapter.

JJTW77JJTW77over 3 years ago
Can’t be the end

Really enjoyed it and hope It continues.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great story line next chapter please

great story line... interested in the character interactio s between clarks mom and clark once she find out he has grown up. will she change her perspective or continue to see him as a child...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
You're on a roll

Keep the story coming. It is enjoyable reading and a good story-line.

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 3 years ago

Good start!

Five stars for the start of a hot series. Will be watching for chapter 2 and beyond.

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent story

Really enjoyed it. The title made me think it would be 2 girls for some reason but this was definitely enjoyable,

Crusader235Crusader235over 3 years ago
Nice

Nice story until the Cream pie eating. Yuck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Perfect Story!

Thank you!!! loved it along with another part of my lower body did as well!!! So yummy and sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Creampie

Not a fan of eating his own cum, maybe place in warning at beginning. Otherwise we’ll done.

JimmyHuntJimmyHuntover 3 years ago

Perfect Story!

Thank you!!! loved it. So yummy and sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved this. Thank you for writing it.

Mojo648Mojo648over 1 year ago

PLEASE, YOU MUST DEFINITELY WRITE ALOT MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY, If you have to take the story past his graduation, there marriage, his job and the birth of the twins (which she found out just after his graduation and asked him if he's running away like a boy or maning up like a man he says he is).

wasagadavewasagadaveabout 1 year ago

Very enjoyable. I envy your writing. Lots of detail. Story kept my attention. Bonus: although anal was mentioned, it didn't happen. Don't no why you'd fuck an ass when there's a hungry pussy or mouth available.

5 STARS! Good Job!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

You lost me near the beginning when the couple started to discuss their possible future together in front of 2 boys in the car.

P_DoggP_Dogg8 months ago

Great story, there could be so much more.

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