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by queenofswords

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
HOT

hot hot hot...loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
quite hot

i checked to see your other stories it was so good and there werent any. Keep writing i enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
No ending

You forgot to write the ending about the consequences for cheating on her husband. Jusice will prevail when her husband boot her ass out the door and divorce her, then she will know how clever she really is. Cheers Roger.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
who needs an ending?

Great work! Loved it and hope you write/post more here.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 12 years ago
OH

What the fuck was that?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Do the kids come home?Did he come?We know Mom did! Do they remain good friends/wives/husbands/fathers/mothers???Sounds like a good series here,but each episode needs closure.

BelindaG70BelindaG70over 4 years ago
So Erotic!

Thanks for writing....

Such a hot read. Hottest one page story Ive ever enjoyed

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