All Comments on 'Monday Mayhem Day 04'

bring this story to an end ,just write that the twins got switched back to being themselves

Teased at the Incest thing. You should have just had them fuck each other. Then they would have been closer and ended the story. It's like you are throwing everything including the kitchen sink into it.

I've loved your Monday Mayhem Day story since day one, keep up the good work & please try to finish them earlier, Five stars! Cheers!!

I was disappointed with the length because I was hoping you'd delve more into the social interactions and dilemmas of these characters rather than just focused on the sex. I do think you're doing a great job of making the characters and the story interesting, so looking forward to the next chapter.

Also, how many Chinese ladies just happen to live conveniently in the middle of nowhere America in a most likely white countryside? That's just a cliche, and superstitious and insulting to boot. Might as well just have depicted her as the clichéd nutty witch lady with the broom and cats, she would've fight in much better with the demographic.

Don't listen to these malcontents. I'm enjoying the scenario playing itself out. I trust that you'll get to the incest when and how you want to. You've gotten this far; I know you know what you're doing.